Reviews for To Hell; It's Nice To Be Back-Part One. PLEASE REVIEW, I will also return the favour
| Raven |
06/18/06 - 10:20PM |
3: Chapter 2 |
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| HEY GO TO HELL FILMTHEORY! Ok, I don't really mean that, but Glory was a great vilian. And lets face it, Buffy's greates challenge. I did like that year, Plus we got to see Buffy died a hero, they way she should go out. To bad she came back, as a mean self abosebe bitch, and stayed that way, the rest of the serise. But I'm rambling. Anyway I liked the stroy |
| filmtheory |
05/17/06 - 02:02PM |
3: Chapter 2 |
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Good chapter. I loved the Buffy/ Willow interaction. The internal monologue about the mortgage was killer. As for Ben being back . . . eh. His alter ego was easily my least favorite of the Big Bads. Still, I’m hoping you can do more with her than the show did.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your support! Really?! Season 5's big bad was my most favourite big bad of all...ok minus spike...but he's not exaclty bad anymore. Plus I'm chaning it a bit. Wait and see. |
| Psyche2 |
05/16/06 - 06:29PM |
1: Prologue |
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| That was a great opening chapter! I can't wait to read more. I'm on the edge of my seat. |
| twinblade |
05/16/06 - 02:39PM |
6: Chapter 5 |
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| Good story so far. I will look for updates. |
| sugarmouse |
05/16/06 - 10:57AM |
6: Chapter 5 |
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| fab chappy!!!....luuved the attitude of the hellgod thing!!! Update soon! |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
05/16/06 - 08:16AM |
6: Chapter 5 |
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| Sounding good so far dude! I am really enjoying this! |
| Rose Thorn |
05/15/06 - 08:58PM |
3: Chapter 2 |
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| That was agreat stroy!! I love the way you write...
Please read my story!!! |
| Kevin |
05/15/06 - 06:48PM |
1: Prologue |
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This was a really cool prologue. It reminded me a bit of Glory attacking the monks in season 5, but there’s a little more information about what the demon is after. Still, you’re not too specific, which is good. I like the mystery aspect of the story. I’m trying to think of how many dead Buffy villains had bodies left when she was done so I can feel smart when the secret is revealed. I was a little surprised the story was rated NC-17. I think you could easily get away with a PG-13 and possibly even a PG.
Author's Response: Thanks for your supposrt mate! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. YEah the rating is coz I'm lazy ya see, not every chapter is full of extreme violence, there are some that will have more than others. I'm just a little too lazy to go around editing each chapter's rating. THe whole story itself will be rated like that. Plus I'm english and don't really get these ratings. I enivsaged it to be the english rating of a "15"...the NC17 was the closest to it. |
| filmtheory |
05/15/06 - 06:39PM |
2: Chapter 1 |
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Great second chapter. I like how your story is structured like the show. The intro, like the teaser, shows a villain up to no good. Then we cut to the first scene with Buffy and crew fighting low level baddies. Then on with the plot. I love the quips. (“Buffy can’t come to the phone right now”). Also, you do a great job building suspense. I’m wondering what Willow saw and whose tomb Jeremiah is after. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you again! I have many interesting plans I hope you will enjoy. And thank you for the compliments on the quips. I'm always worried I don't get the characters sounding right. |
| filmtheory |
05/15/06 - 05:20PM |
1: Prologue |
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Nice set up and exposition for the story. The demon seemed like the perfect kind of villain. He’s clever and funny, yet scary enough to make a priest run and take out a building full of people. I look forward to reading about him as well as whatever he’s conjuring.
Author's Response: Why thank you. If you enjoy the prologue I hope you'll like the other chapters. I plan to get onto the next chapter asap. |
| sugarmouse |
05/15/06 - 10:56AM |
5: Chapter 4 |
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woo! new chapter! glory' back!! she was an awesome baddy! This looks set 2 b a great bit of fanfic!!!!!.................just a question tho...shudn't glory b easier 2 fight this time round since there a lot more slayers around now?
Author's Response: Thanks for your support! This is really my first pice of fanfic. Aw well, I don't wana give too much of the story away, but, if you remember at the moment Glory is only in a weak spirit form. Plus this spirit form is trapped in a mirror. We will find out later that it is the only way she could have been revived. For the moment she is technically trapped. At teh moment Jeremiah is the main problem when it comes to teh physical stuff. |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
05/15/06 - 01:38AM |
4: Chapter 3 |
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Good chapter dude!
Author's Response: Aw thanx mate. I aim to please. |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
05/14/06 - 04:08PM |
3: Chapter 2 |
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| This is getting interesting....looking forward to see how you play it out. Keep it up! |
| sugarmouse |
05/14/06 - 08:36AM |
3: Chapter 2 |
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| omg...ur gonna bring her back!!!! I won't say who cos it'll spoil it 4 other readers......nd besides.. I could be wrong.....soooooooo cwl neways...please continue!!! |
| sugarmouse |
05/13/06 - 11:12AM |
2: Chapter 1 |
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great chap, you write Buffy very well...u got the humour in there. Anyways, update soon cause im curious about this new evil thing!...........p.s loving the chapter summary lmao!!!
Author's Response: Ah yes but that is part of the funning, leaving you hanging. THen again, who said the evil was new?
Author's Response: p.s. I really have to get over this whole typo/bad spelling thing, sorry about that |
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