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Spicule 05/02/06 - 09:47AM 7: Welcome to Hell Signed
You have a knack for writing dialogue, especially with Oz, who you keep short, ironic, and witty (I sometimes have trouble with him in my story). And an overall good story progression - i like the little details thrown in there, like Angelica's sense of vertigo at hte edge of the hole. Great story, keep it up.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I struggle with Oz, too. He's definitely a one-of-a-kinder. I'm glad you're enjoying so far. Thanks so much for the feedback!

Lauren M Chandler 04/30/06 - 02:31PM 7: Welcome to Hell Signed
i love the way you write Oz..It's prefect! I love the dialgog!! "Neo"..lmao!! This is 'edge of seat' reading material! I can't wait for more!!!
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