Reviews for Discipline
| slayerfest |
04/29/06 - 09:16PM |
13: Brain Damage |
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All right. I just reread the whole story and I realized that the problem is the whole Buffy/Scoobies association. I would have thought it would be different, but it's a minor thing as far as things go and it'll sort itself out at some point anyway. This is extremely well-written. You've done a really gorgeous job with the characters, especially Willow. I still absolutely love the way you've rearranged the season sort-of, and added a few new elements, too. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, especially since I have no idea where I'd take it in this situation.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Glad to hear it. There will be more Buffy/Scoobies interaction because of the whole convalescence thing... Basically, the way any bad guys attack Buffy throughout the series is by trying to separate her from her friends. So that's what Snyder has been doing. I doubt he'll be able to continue doing it, though. But we'll see. I wish I wasn't so lazy... :-) |
| MissEdith |
04/22/06 - 11:23AM |
13: Brain Damage |
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Spectacular, spectacular (the words of the vernacular...sorry, Moulin Rouge moment). Anyway, I loved the chapter. The short Willow/Xander conversation about her being superwitch, Buffy trying to speak through the respirator tube (and you actually sounded like you knew what you were talking about with the medical stuff!), and Spike and Dru's inner monologues.
Author's Response: Yay! Success! I know NOTHING about medicine apart from what I've seen on TV, and I don't even watch E.R. Basically it's all pieced together from old M*A*S*H episodes. Thanks! |
| Peaches Girl |
04/20/06 - 11:51PM |
13: Brain Damage |
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Wow, bullet in the head kind of gross but I just love Spike's mind, he makes me laugh. Great chapter cant wait till you update.
Author's Response: Thanks! |
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