Reviews for A Darker Purpose
| Redefinition |
05/13/06 - 09:36AM |
4: Part 4 |
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Very nice. ANd now I want to know, what is Traver's biggest secret?! Hurry and write some more please!
:-)
Author's Response: Thanks for all your lovely reviews. Well, if you want to find out travers' big secret....you're gonna have to keep reading.....I plan on revealing all in time.... |
| Redefinition |
05/13/06 - 09:28AM |
3: Part 3 |
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| Ah that makes a little more sense then. I'm liking your alternative dimension thing. Plus again with the writing of Spike. I'm very interested in what will happen next. |
| Redefinition |
05/13/06 - 09:20AM |
2: Part 2 |
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| Gotta say I'm liking the Spike dialogue myself. I really hope that I can manage all the whit aswell as it is done on here. Sadly in my story section Anya is dead already and I think Spike probably is too which sux. They are the best to write for. Sorry got carried away, The Cleff notes are: Good comedic dialogue! |
| Redefinition |
05/13/06 - 09:14AM |
1: Part 1 |
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| I gotsta say that yeah I'm enjoying it to. Although I did smile at the very English "Oi!" from a very American Buffy. But all in all it's very good so far, and the clifhangerage is intriguing! (and I really need to learn how to spell) |
| Cheza |
04/29/06 - 01:08PM |
3: Part 3 |
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ooo I like it. I think your write Spike very well. I'm assuming that this is after Riley left sunnydale? Anyway, its good, I like it. I'll check back later for the next chapter.
Author's Response: glad ur still liking it, btw the story is set season 4 (a little AU). Maggie Walsh or Adam don't exist and in my story Buffy is seing Riley.....but doesn't know he belongs to the initiative......I hope to update it soon! |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:57PM |
2: Part 2 |
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I have to say this is my fave thing of yours...the writting was great, each character really sounded like themselves...I absolutly LOVED the spike dialoge. "...cuz...I'm evil." Lol!!! I loved it. Let me know when ur next chapter is up.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! :-) glad ur liking my spike dialoge...im working hard on it lol! anyways, just posted the next chap! |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:53PM |
1: Part 1 |
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| lol YES I always knew he was evil. Lol your such a dork, I dont think Buffy would say "Oi" ...thats Aussie isnt it? But personally I thought that part was funny. Anyway I like it, good writting, good cliffhanger too |
| axel |
04/23/06 - 04:21PM |
2: Part 2 |
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I hate to say it, but if she couldn't beat one, that doesn't look good. Keep it up.
Author's Response: true it doesn't look good for Buffy...........and things will get worse............ |
| axel |
04/23/06 - 11:20AM |
1: Part 1 |
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| It looks like Buffy's SOL. QuentinTravers evil? Yeah, I buy that. Explains alot. Good start. |
| CelesteAvonne |
04/21/06 - 11:14PM |
1: Part 1 |
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Hey! I laughed out loud several times in your Part 2. You've got some really good dialogue in there. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm really chuffed that I made you laugh! You've made my day! :-)
I tried to put a lot of effort into Spike and Anya's dialoge.
Thanks for Reviewing!!! I hope to update soon! |
| Wonkabar |
04/18/06 - 04:26PM |
1: Part 1 |
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Great start, and I love cliffhangers. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's appreciated! I hope to update it soon so hopefully you won't be hanging on for too long! :-) |
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