Reviews for Two of a kind
| Icequeen |
04/14/06 - 01:18PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| That is one hecka of a cliffhanger! Man, I hate Riley so much. I hope Buffy beats him up if he shoots Angel. |
| Peaches Girl |
04/13/06 - 08:43PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| Oh no, stupid Reiley. He always comes at the wrong time. Hope Angel is ok. Great chapter, love it, but I do adore everything you do. |
| Spicule |
04/13/06 - 12:02AM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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damnit - change "beginning was bad" to beginning wasn't bad." wow, i have a habit of sucking at typing. Sorry again, i really meant "wasn't."
Author's Response: It's okay, i get what you meant and thanks. You know, not to sound condecending or insulting (just in case you take it that way) in any way, but you talk like (or rather write like) my boyfriend. Weird. Same style i think. |
| Spicule |
04/13/06 - 12:01AM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| pretty good chapter. The beginning was bad, it was just the necessary expository dialogue that sets up the chain of events later on. Speaking of later on, the chapter gained good momentum and ended on a good note. I'd say you did a fine job this chapter. Keep it up! |
| Psyche2 |
04/12/06 - 11:25AM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| OMG! Fantastic chapter, a lot of suspense and tension! Can't wait to see what you do next! Cliff-hanger much? Please update soon, I am on the edge of my seat!! |
| Ksue |
04/12/06 - 09:05AM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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Overall it was a good chapter. The beggining wasn't your best, but it wasn't bad by any means. I loved the part with Riley holding the gun on ANgel, but I swear to God if you killed human Angel before he and Buffy got any smoochies, I will hunt you down and make you rewrite it. J/K! But seriously, don't let Angel die. Oh, and the growl? Absolutly the most sexy thing in the world!
Author's Response: Believe me, I would never, ever, ever, ever, EVER kill off Angel; unless i had serious plans to bring him back. He and Buffy belong together and that's how it will stay. And the growl? I agree... |
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