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Lauren M Chandler 06/23/06 - 12:22PM 15: Seduced Signed
woah! Heavy chapter! I feel so bad for William. He feels like he failed, and that thing that got him...ugh! Dawn's character is getting really interesting. I'm worried abut her. And what's up with Angelica?? This is so good! I can't wait for more!

Lauren M Chandler 06/15/06 - 11:22AM 14: Thanksgiving Signed
I love Spike when he's all parental! I really do! Dawn is such a naughty scamp! I love it! And Andrew. LMAO at his behavior and lines. He's so funny! And eating the pumpkin pie mix directly from the can! Too funny! I'm so glad he's in your story!

Lauren M Chandler 06/12/06 - 08:15PM 13: Enthralled Signed
First of all, I love this chapter. Second of all, I love the way you describe each scene so perfectly, I can see it clearly in my head.Third, freakin Stevie Nicks video turn..you rock! and I sooo know what you mean by that..haha! Buffy's dream in all was frightening. I am so excited aand afraid! :) Love it Celeste!

Author's Response: Lauren, you give the very best feedback :) I'm all excited now!

Lauren M Chandler 06/08/06 - 09:15PM 12: Lusty Wrong Feelings Signed
Yes! Dawnie's all grown up! I love it! And the scary forest..hmmmm. I am so addicted Celeste..I need more!! :)

Author's Response: Lauren - you rock! I have more Dawnie naughiness on the way *wiggle eyebrows*

Lauren M Chandler 05/31/06 - 01:14PM 11: Empty as Houses Signed
9021-Hellmoth! haha. Spike brushing Dawn's hair, how sweet.

Lauren M Chandler 05/22/06 - 10:03PM 10: International Calls Signed
This is brilliant Celeste!! I love the different vampires species! and Connor..oh my god..I just know he's going to do something naughty!! I love Faith in your strories. She's so much wiser and cooler than ever, which you'd expect her to be by this point. I can't wait for more. These character are wriiten so perfectly. And the new ones are excellent and intruiging!

Lauren M Chandler 05/16/06 - 11:51AM 9: Matters of Time and Fishes Signed
I love love love the fish references!! This one is so cool and funny!

Lauren M Chandler 05/11/06 - 10:17AM 8: Relative Signed
OO wow! I love this!! I love the difference you show between Spike amd William! Poor William, losing Buffy is tearing him apart! I'm so looking foward to more!!

Spicule 05/02/06 - 09:47AM 7: Welcome to Hell Signed
You have a knack for writing dialogue, especially with Oz, who you keep short, ironic, and witty (I sometimes have trouble with him in my story). And an overall good story progression - i like the little details thrown in there, like Angelica's sense of vertigo at hte edge of the hole. Great story, keep it up.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I struggle with Oz, too. He's definitely a one-of-a-kinder. I'm glad you're enjoying so far. Thanks so much for the feedback!

Lauren M Chandler 04/30/06 - 02:45PM 1: Blood, Pressure Signed
Rating: 10 What I would rate it: 100! Noticing all the spelling errors I make on your reviews..priceless! LOL

Author's Response: Lauren! You're awesome :) You always make me laugh.

Lauren M Chandler 04/30/06 - 02:31PM 7: Welcome to Hell Signed
i love the way you write Oz..It's prefect! I love the dialgog!! "Neo"..lmao!! This is 'edge of seat' reading material! I can't wait for more!!!

Lauren M Chandler 04/22/06 - 06:34PM 4: All's Well Signed
That Eve. Gotta love to hate her!! I'm so glad Oz is still around. He's one of my favs! I can't wait to see what they find!

Lauren M Chandler 04/22/06 - 06:32PM 3: Something's Wrong With Buffy Signed
“A what-ernarian?” So funny. I can see her saying that. I love this one. It's really eerie. I like when Spike joins Buffy on the roof and she tells him she was talking to Giles. you can tell he's really scared for her. It must be killing him to watch her go through this.

Lauren M Chandler 04/22/06 - 06:29PM 2: The Drawing Board Signed
oo. This one's good! What's happening with Dawn?

Lauren M Chandler 04/22/06 - 06:28PM 1: Blood, Pressure Signed
I love the part when the doctor asks Spike to sign the release. Hmmm. Gives him something to thinkabout, huh? hehe.

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