Reviews for Part One - Wishes
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 12:55AM |
3: City of Angels |
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| This one gives me chills...I love it.
(and since this is the second time I'm reading this....I know what happens..I know what happens..!!)
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| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 12:52AM |
1: London Flat |
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| I love this story so much I am reading it again!!! YEY!!
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| filmtheory |
05/08/06 - 06:21PM |
3: City of Angels |
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After a comical and dramatic chapter, you give us as good an action sequence as I’ve seen. In so many fics dealing with the battle, the author concentrated on the action and had Angel & co. doing amazingly well. I love that this one deals so much with strategy and, of course, ends much more realistically. You do such a fabulous job of conveying the horror, hopelessness, and desperation of their situation. In two relatively short chapters, you already have everything I could want in a fic, serious action, family drama, angst-filled romance, and humor. Having all that while staying true to the characters is simply amazing.
Author's Response: *blush profusely*
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. |
| filmtheory |
05/08/06 - 06:06PM |
2: London Flat |
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| Great start to the story. The humor was just so natural. (I’m so jealous of that, by the way). The way that you built the drama while working in the exposition was fabulous. I’m anxious to see what happens with Buffy and her personal life. I can’t really think of any other post-Chosen fic that’s made me care about that. Great chapter! |
| Acila |
04/14/06 - 11:03PM |
2: London Flat |
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I have fallen in love with your story...but since it will take me forever to read it all....about a week or so...I'm going to review now. Im so adding this story to my favs. mostly cuz you are such a good writer that you have me hooked, and the plot rocks as of this moment. Kudos! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you Acila! Happy to hear that you're enjoying it. Thanks for the kudos, too. |
| axel |
04/09/06 - 02:28PM |
3: City of Angels |
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And Spike dies again. Tough day. Good so far.
Author's Response: Yes, but he's only mostly dead... :) |
| Icequeen |
04/01/06 - 08:18PM |
35: Here's Where the Story Ends |
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| I'm so surprised this hasn't got a lot of reviews. This whole plot was really awesome and I saw part two and I'm gonna read that when I finish writing this. So the Black Thorn mark was what was making Angel weak...intresting. Great job with Part One! |
| scaredycat |
03/31/06 - 02:58PM |
2: London Flat |
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i know this is kinda silly but are you english? i am and i call a house a house. A flat is an apartment (i think thats what americans call them). A flat is a one floor place where you live. Sorry i just had to say as i was a bit confused at the beginning.
Author's Response: No, I'm painfully not English. I have been to London, and I love it there. I've based Buffy's UK "Flat" on the Flat in 'Spaced'. It's bascially a renovated house, and they all have separate flats or apartements in the house. |
| Psyche2 |
03/30/06 - 07:00PM |
1: London Flat |
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| This looks really good, I can't wait to read it!!! |
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