Reviews for Part One - Wishes
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/31/06 - 10:52AM |
16: Connection |
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First of all, Plainsong...perfect! And this part gives me chills, in a good way! I can feel thier heat and love and passion and , and... everything! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, Lauren. Plainsong is my favorite ever Cure song and it just seemed to fit. Your reviews are so encouraging to me :) |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/31/06 - 10:50AM |
13: A Round In |
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| I really love this scene. William and Andrew..I loved the funny chemistry they always had.
oh, and stupid Immortal! |
| Kevin |
05/30/06 - 05:20PM |
6: Coming Home |
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Awesome mystery built around Spike. I don't want to go into it for fear of spoiling, but I'm so curious about so many things. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Kevin :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. |
| Kevin |
05/30/06 - 05:16PM |
5: Fruitless |
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| I love Andrew's "I wanna be called!" But of course, it's hard to focus on any part of the chapter except the end. Wow. What an ending. I can't wait to see where htis goes next. |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/25/06 - 06:50PM |
12: Aura |
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| So beautifully wriiten. I can see in so clear, the stars, everything.
Wow. It gave me chills.
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| Lauren M Chandler |
05/25/06 - 06:48PM |
11: Kensington Park |
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| haha! I am so picturing this whole scene in my head..and lovin' it sooo much, I have to see it on film. Have to..have to..!!
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| Lauren M Chandler |
05/25/06 - 06:47PM |
10: The Kitchen Witch |
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| Yay! I love this one! |
| Kevin |
05/18/06 - 11:10PM |
4: Wishes |
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| More killer comedy and emotional tension. I'm usually not a Spuffy fan , but Buffy's lonliness is so palpable. You really have a way of bringing that out. |
| Kevin |
05/18/06 - 11:15AM |
3: City of Angels |
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| Awesome- You totally threw me. I was expecting another funny and emotionally charged chapter like the one before. Instead, it was a blood-pumping action scene. I’m so interested in both these stories. Whether they stay disparate or are eventually tied together, both story lines have me hooked. I’m off to read more. |
| Kevin |
05/15/06 - 07:34PM |
2: London Flat |
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| What a great start! It's nice to see this (mostly) happy assembly of scoobies, though I know it can't last. I like that Dawn is settling into a "normal" life and, though it's painful, Buffy is trying to get over her past relationships. The humor and drama were a heartwarming start to a story that I'm sure is about to throw some tough times at our heroes. Great start! |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 10:10AM |
8: Religious Experience, with Donuts |
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| haha! I love the dialog between everyone. And the donut experience..so funny!! And the name change...very nice touch! |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 10:06AM |
7: Unwelcome |
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| I love Buffy's dream. It's so creepy!! |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 12:59AM |
6: Coming Home |
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| Ooo! What's wrong with Spike? OMG..I love this!!! |
| Lauren M Chandler |
05/14/06 - 12:58AM |
5: Fruitless |
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I absolutely LOVE this chapter!! I can see it all (and I mean..all)
I love Buffy's reaction!!
Author's Response: Yeah... I can see it... all, too. haha! |
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