Reviews for Aimless, almost
| twinblade |
03/30/06 - 05:34AM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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easy read, got my attention and yes I like it. What I'm curious about is what is her story. Shouldn't the Angel team Investigate or something?
Author's Response: Thank you. As for her story I'm getting to it just let my hands catch up to my brain. =) |
| always angel |
03/29/06 - 08:17PM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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I think your plot is moving fast enough, but then again thats just me.
Author's Response: lol. gee thanks. it's getting more difficult to find time to write the story out especially when I keep getting interrupted but there is more on its way. |
| slayerfest |
03/29/06 - 06:55PM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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It is indeed easily read. The chapters are a bit short, though... it works for the story, but maybe not for the speed at which the plot is progressing. Shorter chapters are for very fast-paced stories; yours is more relaxed. Still excellent and suspenseful, but you really might want to try and lengthen the amount you post at a time. It's up to you, though... keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm workinf off notes, the story is still in my head. I'm actually typing it out as I go that's why the short posts. =)
Author's Response: P.S. is my plot not going fast enough? |
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