Reviews for Betrayed
| i_hate_mornings |
03/29/06 - 08:10AM |
2: Chapter One and Two: Rejoining |
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I noticed the difference in this chapter. Connor previously met Miricle in bed, right? This way is actually stronger but it seems to me that something is missing. Some info previously given? Not sure on that. Good work though.
Author's Response: Connor did meet Miracle in bed, but in Chapter 5 I'm going to explain who Miracle is but I will include a Miracle/Connor bed scene in Chapter 5. |
| Psyche2 |
03/28/06 - 07:55PM |
2: Chapter One and Two: Rejoining |
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Great! I love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Coming soon, I hope. Keep reading! |
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