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SakuraSyaoran4eva 03/29/06 - 09:54PM 6: Chapter 6 Signed
Lolz. I really like this fic! Especially how you dissed Riley (by making him gay) and made peace with him (by making him the nice one) at the same time. BTW, you messed up the tenses in one of the chapters - 3 or 4? Spike and Buffy were outside, and Buffy thought about how no one "haD" made her feel like that in a while - u wrote haS instead of haD. Overall, pretty mistake-free grammer and spelling wise. Very realistic for an AU and pretty engaging. 9/10 SS4EVA
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