Reviews for Aimless, Almost
| always angel |
04/03/06 - 03:05PM |
5: A Proper Welcome |
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I'm glad you're writing another story becasue if you left it this way it would drive me crazy!
Author's Response: lol. sop what did you think? is it enough to want to read some more? |
| always angel |
03/31/06 - 11:09PM |
4: Sing for Me |
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I'm really loving this story so far and I really like Phade to. I like that shes not afraid to tell people what she thinks.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've developed a fondness for Phade and I'm happy that people reading this fic like her. Hopefully she'll make the tansfer to manga just as well. |
| scaredycat |
03/31/06 - 02:46PM |
4: Sing for Me |
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i like this! I love Phade. I especially like the arguments. Please update.
Author's Response: thanks! i gotta say arguing is my major defect and this char is all about dealing with her conflict and problems. |
| twinblade |
03/30/06 - 05:34AM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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easy read, got my attention and yes I like it. What I'm curious about is what is her story. Shouldn't the Angel team Investigate or something?
Author's Response: Thank you. As for her story I'm getting to it just let my hands catch up to my brain. =) |
| filmtheory |
03/29/06 - 10:36PM |
1: The Hyperion |
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Love the first chapter. The narrator is hysterical. I’m wondering how her life will get worse. Going to the Hyperion is certainly a step in that direction.
Author's Response: lol. thanks much. I was hoping to get some laughs. Life will definitely take a turn not so much to her liking in later chapters. |
| always angel |
03/29/06 - 08:17PM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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I think your plot is moving fast enough, but then again thats just me.
Author's Response: lol. gee thanks. it's getting more difficult to find time to write the story out especially when I keep getting interrupted but there is more on its way. |
| slayerfest |
03/29/06 - 06:55PM |
3: Woman to Woman |
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It is indeed easily read. The chapters are a bit short, though... it works for the story, but maybe not for the speed at which the plot is progressing. Shorter chapters are for very fast-paced stories; yours is more relaxed. Still excellent and suspenseful, but you really might want to try and lengthen the amount you post at a time. It's up to you, though... keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm workinf off notes, the story is still in my head. I'm actually typing it out as I go that's why the short posts. =)
Author's Response: P.S. is my plot not going fast enough? |
| twinblade |
03/29/06 - 06:53AM |
2: Run! |
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| excellent work look forward to more |
| always angel |
03/28/06 - 11:44PM |
1: The Hyperion |
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| Very interesting. You've sucked me in already. Hope you update soon. |
| slayerfest |
03/28/06 - 10:15PM |
2: Run! |
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What excellence. I appear to be enthralled.
Author's Response: you couldn't possibly have read the next chapter already. did u? |
| twinblade |
03/24/06 - 06:33AM |
1: The Hyperion |
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Excellent beginning, I look forward to more. RTF.
Author's Response: "Locke and Key"
I only got to read the first part bc I'm trying to get the rest of 'Aimles, Almost' done but what i did read I got hooked.
Dungeon's and Dragons?
Do you play? |
| slayerfest |
03/23/06 - 08:04PM |
1: The Hyperion |
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Neat, neat. You have a very distinctive style that intrigues me. I'm anticipating the next chapter.
Author's Response: I like your 'Tell me a Story'. You're one of the few who I can read thorugh frustration free.
Thanks for the review. |
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