Reviews for Into the Night (Rewrite)
| axel |
03/23/06 - 03:03PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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I'm glad you did this the normal way. (to be honsent, I found the old one a little hard to get into, with Buffy, and Angel, out of character. It was good, just distracting.) Maybe some sould set up a new site, where we can put up what we want, and have people read it. (just not me, bacause I don't know how to set one up)
Author's Response: Yeah, I get the distracting part because I found I was distracting myself by posting it that way - where I was losing the vision I had of Jericho and Ariadne and started seeing Angel and Buffy, which was not good. And you know what, that is a really cool idea about having a website to post paranormal/vampire related original stories. My husband knows about webpages and writing computer programs and all the stuff thats pretty much foreign to me. But yeah, maybe I can talk to him about it and see if he'd help me set one up. If I ever do, I'll let you know! |
| axel |
03/23/06 - 02:54PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Wererabits? HA! Do they kill, with eater eggs? I'm kidding. Good so far.
Author's Response: Ha ha ... easter eggs :-P Seriously though, I know it sounds funny, but I've got all these books on demons and stuff and there are shape shifting legends for just about every animal you can think of - its pretty interesting reading all these crazy demonology myths people came up with. |
| Ksue |
03/23/06 - 01:21PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Again, I love it. You're so talented, and I hope that someday you're able to get this published (????). IT's a great story line, and I love the characters. Even without you describing him, I get the sense tat Sterling is hot, in a cocky, dashing sort of way. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - you have no idea how much I appreciate the kind words. As for Sterling, thats a good point, I should've described him in that chapter. In the original version, I described him in chapter 3, but the original chapter 3 (a flashback sequence) got deleted because I just didn't think it fit right. I see Sterling as a younger Josh Holloway - in his modeling days long before he became Sawyer on Lost. He looked a good bit different back then in some of the pictures I've found. |
| always angel |
03/22/06 - 10:41PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Great chapter as always. If you do make this into a series are you going to post them here too?
Author's Response: As always, thank you. Well, my thoughts on that are I'll continue posting until and if (God willing) I get published. I've got the framework for the second story worked out to an extent, so if I remain unpublished by the time I start writing that one, I'll post it. |
| Sinister |
03/22/06 - 09:48PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Another amazing chapter as always! I didn't notice too many differences in this chapter or at least not as many as the first 2 but I'm saying that in a good way. I liked this chapter just how it was it was a good moment between Ariadne and Sterling and I love it! Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love the Sterling/Ariadne dynamic ... and, well, I'll admit it, I just love Sterling period. I think he's probably my favorite character I've ever created in all my writing, and, eventually, if I get to write my series, he'll definitely have a book that focuses on him. But yes, this chapter was very similar with the exception of some minor editing and dialogue changes. The next few chapters coming up will be mostly the same with only maybe a few noticeable differences. The next chapter that has a big change is chapter 9 ... I think ... well, anyway, as always thank you so much!! |
| Peaches Girl |
03/22/06 - 09:12PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Yes, as I read this I can recall your orginal posting. However I still enjoy reading it again. Post soon please.
Author's Response: So happy to hear it! If you can read it again without getting bored, thats always bonus points in my book :) As always, thank you so much for the reviews. |
| MissEdith |
03/22/06 - 09:09PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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Question: are there any differences (other than the names) between this and the original version you posted? Whichever one you continue with, I will definitely read since I think it's awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - your support on my last version was greatly appreciated. And there are some noticeable differences, like Prologue and chapter 1, whereas chapter 2 is nearly the same with the exception of some minor editing. Further down the road, there are some bigger differences in certain chapters, but the basic plot remains the same. |
| Ksue |
03/22/06 - 01:29PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Ah! I love it! I'm so glad that Heat of the NIght inspired you to update this, and rewrite it as your original work. I'm really interested in where this story is going, and it sounds so far like a great plot! Two questions htough: How old is Ariadne (sp?), cause the drinking and smoking thing kind of threw me. And, How do you pronnounce her name? I kept reading it as Adrianne, but I know that's not right. I can't for the life of me figure it out! Anyway, great job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you're enjoying it, and I truly hope you keep reading. Ariadne is 22, and I'm glad you pointed that out. I thought I had that in the first chapter, but I went back and read, realizing I only put she'd been hunting Santo for 4 years. Its in a later chapter I say she just graduated high school and was 18 when Santo killed her parents. So that may require a minor edit to establish her age earlier. According to my book on Greek mythology, Ariadne is pronounced ar i AD nee and the origins of her name (being Greek) and the meaning of her name (very holy one) will come into play in later books since I kind of have this planned as an ongoing series ... if I ever get published :) But hey, again, thank you a million times over. The review is much appreciated!! |
| always angel |
03/21/06 - 11:27PM |
2: Chapter One |
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I just want to say that I'm enjoying this story so far and not to worry about others not liking it b/c its not a Buffy story. You've got 100% of my support. Also, I was wondering if this was gonna stick to the basic plot of the other one or if it was gonna be completly differant.
Author's Response: As always, thank you so much for everything. You're always one of the first to review everything of mine, and I appreciate it so much. And yes, more or less, this is the same basic plot. There are some things added along the way, and some things changed/edited. But, more or less, the plot is moving in the same direction as the previous version. |
| Peaches Girl |
03/21/06 - 08:44PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Okay, first I want to say that I loved the first story you wrote but then I realized that this is your first story. I love your descriptions and how you make me picture her feelings in my mind so descriptive, I have a few fav.'s if I may quote you:
'a lifeless cement hollow near the weeping willows that mourned past days' Brilliant and also:'She'd be stripped naked, vulmerable to the melancholy that loomed like a persistant fiend.' That is fantastic, I love it. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: That's fabulous - I love it!! Its so good to know that those things stuck with you especially since I get nervous about a lot of description without action or dialogue to break it up. Thank you so much for the review - it means so much, and I'm so thrilled you enjoyed those descriptives. |
| Sinister |
03/21/06 - 08:24PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Awesome! As always wonderful work. I'm loving the rewrites. I loved the other story too but it's interesting to see how you've changed things. Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: As always, I cannot thank you enough for all of your encouragement and great reviews. I really can't express how much I appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the changes, and there are some more to come, but nothing that drastically changes the plot. Again, thank you a million times over!!! |
| Icequeen |
03/21/06 - 01:12PM |
1: Prologue |
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I love this story! I'm glad you're finally writing it again. Why did you decide to re-write it?
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm so happy you're enjoying it. I think I decided the rewrite mostly because I'm beginning to think I have a phobia of finishing stories :) I have major rewriting problems - in that I always do it, and nothing ever gets finished! Well, theres that and the fact that certain things just didn't add up right in my opinion. I'm probably being too critical, but it bothered me, so I figured some things needed to be added, some things changed ... I'm pretty happy with it so far ... as happy as I can be with my own writing ... so, hopefully I'll finish it this time through. Thanks so much again!! |
| axel |
03/20/06 - 11:09PM |
1: Prologue |
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HEY, YOUR BUSTED! Buffy's not in this, I'm calling the cops! (I'm kidding) Anyway good work. Be then it was good before.
Author's Response: Ha, ha :-P But hey, seriously, thanks so much for your support - I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you've taken the time to read it ... even though it isn't about Buffy ... but, hey, bonus points for having vampires in it, right?? |
| always angel |
03/20/06 - 09:56PM |
1: Prologue |
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I like this version. Its nice being able to read it with the original character's names. Glad you're back!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review ... just as I can't thank you enough for all the great encouragement you gave to me in the last version. I like seeing it with the original character names too :) When I was putting Buffy and Angel in that place, it was weird, but I felt like I was having an identity crisis with my characters or something. But, okay, so I'm weird. Anyway, thanks for the review - glad you like it :) |
| Sinister |
03/20/06 - 09:19PM |
1: Prologue |
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Awesome! I like how you've got your original characters in this version. It's like I'm reading the actual book and its cool. I love this story and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I appreciate all your wonderful reviews and all your kind words. I know you'd probably rather have an update on the other version instead of going back to the beginning with this version ... but, major rewrite mode has changed things around a little. And, I guess I just wanted to post it with the characters' real names as opposed to Buffy and Angel. As always, thank you a million times over, and I promise I'll be catching up on all your updated stories soon :) |
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