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Acila 03/14/06 - 04:21PM 5: After the storm Signed
Ooo I love this story, have you ever read the book Pirates by Celia Reese, you would love it, based on how your writing this story, there not similiar but they have to do with women in pirates life and its a really good book....anyway getting side tracked. I wanna give you some advice, I havn't found anything wrong grammer or spelling wise but it would be easier to read if you spaced out your quotations instead of bunching everything togeather....to get an Idea of what Im saying I have alog of dialog in my story Vindiction and I put spaces between it to make it easier to read. Other then that I love the story and Can't wait for an update, you really are a amazing writer :D

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review my story! =) I haven't read that book, I might look in to it once I have finished writing this story. (I try not to read other stories dealing with the same kind of subject that I write about - I usually lose my inspiration for the story if I find something too similar.) I know a lot of people think it's easier to read if there's more space... The problem is that I think it's harder to read stories with a lot of space, so I can't write that way myself. I really appreciate your comment and I will think about it - maybe I have to change the way I write a bit. (It's hard to change a lifetime of habit though :D)






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