Reviews for Hell on Earth 5: Chaos
| axel |
05/09/06 - 06:03PM |
5: Chapter 4: The Calling Pt 1 |
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Don't worry Dawn, you'll die before she does. Hu, that sounded nicer, in my head. Not it just sounds mean. Oh well. Good work, I wonder how it turns out?
Author's Response: yeah i see what you mean. when i was thinking about this chapter i could clearly see dawn being overprotective of Rebbecca also i could see her freaking out after finding out she'd been called. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
04/24/06 - 11:12PM |
4: Chapter 3: Expecting Pt 2 |
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Oh but Angel you are the father!
Author's Response: he'll find out in time. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
03/14/06 - 11:20PM |
3: Chapter 2: Expecting pt 1 |
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Bring in Angel to figure it all out. Funny that hes the father.
Author's Response: Yeah I'm a big fan of irony. i tried to do it in a way where it made sense why they would call in Angel to look into this. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
03/14/06 - 11:07PM |
3: Chapter 2: Expecting pt 1 |
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Expecting part 1? OOH Wonka is going to kick your ass! Good so far.
Author's Response: Hey, what else would you call this chapter? Besides she has to find me first. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
03/13/06 - 12:01AM |
2: Chapter 1: Hippocratic |
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W/R/H made her pregnant? I'm sure it will be a normal baby. HA!
Author's Response: Yeah this girls just going to do every day things. this is what i mentioned during "futures divided" Judson told the group that they made her. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
03/12/06 - 11:20PM |
2: Chapter 1: Hippocratic |
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Poor Dawn
Author's Response: now you know exactly how it happen. how Rebecca came to be. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
03/10/06 - 11:51PM |
1: Prologue |
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yay, more of a story I can't get enough of! I don't see how you can keep up with all these stories but kudos(is that the right term?) for doing it.
Author's Response: the trick is to remove anything that resembles having a life. like i said to Axel this is going to go into more detail about things i touched on lightly in the other fics. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
03/10/06 - 09:13PM |
1: Prologue |
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MORE HELL ON EARTH! What's next, Hell on Earth/ Adventures, in Daycare? (just kidding) Anyway, good start.
Author's Response: I know, I know i may be over doing but i couldn't find a place for this story in any of the H.O.E. series. originally this story was going to be an episode in signum but the more detail i though about the more it seemed like it would be better as a stand alone. this fic is going to go into detail about things i touched on briefly in Futures Divided and Trinity. also if your gonna talk about to many sequels maybe you should talk to wonkabar as well (joking). thanks for reviewing |
| bob_obo |
03/10/06 - 02:05PM |
1: Prologue |
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Nice. One thought - W&H go into liquidation. Of course its more literal...
Author's Response: Well you can't evil law firm down. thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
03/10/06 - 07:26AM |
1: Prologue |
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A prequel... cool
Author's Response: thanks |
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