Reviews for Heat of the Night
| always angel |
07/31/06 - 02:14AM |
12: 12 |
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I'm glad she got Janet back. I would have hated to see something happen to the baby. Hopefully she figures out a way to rescue Aaron.
Author's Response: Yeah, I was a little worried that people would hate me for having her trade Aaron, but sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do. |
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/30/06 - 10:27PM |
3: 3 |
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| I like the interaction between Kara and Aaron. I love how you made that kind of situation that Buffy often faced with the vampires and police. She knows what happened they don't and even her friend doesn't. It makes it a lot more interesting. |
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/30/06 - 10:23PM |
2: 2 |
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| I love the backstory to this. Its great how you are developing the character and making her human despite the Supernatural world she lives in. |
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/30/06 - 10:21PM |
1: Begining |
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I love this. I love how we can develop stories about vampire slayers outside of Buffy. This is great. Good Luck!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! |
| BelovedSlayer |
07/30/06 - 07:46PM |
1: Begining |
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I don't get it. How come barely no one has left reviews for this story? it's very amazing aside from the spelling errors and i'm sure this has the potential to become a awesome novel. if it does become that one day i will definitely buy it for sure. I know alot of people are missing out on this kick ass story even if they don't know it. I for one think it is a great story to read and it is one of my faves as well. Ksue even if there's barely reviews being submitted i hope you don't give up yet. Keep on trying and i'm sure there'll be more people reading your fantastic story. i for one love it and it sure does have alot of unknown potential to become something even greater:) update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! But are there really a lot of spelling errors? Cause I could have sworn I spell checked everything. THe only one I could get right was Bellagio, and it's cause it's not in the computer dictionary. Do you know how to spell it? Anyway, thanks for reviewing so faithfully! |
| always angel |
07/17/06 - 11:06PM |
11: 11 |
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| I really really like this story. You're doing a fantastic job writing it. The characters are so believable and whenI read it I feel like I'm there. Keep up the great work! |
| xsilentx___xscreamsx |
07/12/06 - 05:38PM |
1: Begining |
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| Awesome begining most defidently. Can't wait to read on. I'm not sure if it's just typos or if it's actual words but soem parts we mispelled i think? But it's alright i have that problem too. =] |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/18/06 - 09:11PM |
1: Begining |
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hey its about time that kara and brayden admitted their feelings to each other. i was wondering when that was gonna happen and it finally did. im glad that you added how kara feels about wanting to be dead. it just goes to show that being a vampire slayer can be very daunting and difficult at times. even if in case you don't get alot of reviews i know i will review each chapter when you post them out and not just because you and i worked together its also because i have enjoyed reading your awesome fics from the start. i know it can be disappointing when you dont get enough reviews but don't worry someone is reading your fics:)
Author's Response: Awww, thanks!!! It means a lot to me that you're willing to take the time to read and review each chapter. I figured people might have been waiting for that declaration frm the two, but I also had a lot of people pulling for Kara to end up with Aaron. Thanks again for your review! |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/16/06 - 06:19PM |
1: Begining |
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it has been such a long while since i read this fic. im glad that you finally update it since i pretty much don't have alot of time to read alot of the fics here which sucks alot. what i really like about your fic is how Kara is struggling to balance vampire slaying with her somewhat normal life. that right there seems to make her more human, more normal if its possible. i hope this does turn into a novel because it has alot of awesome potential. looking forward to a update asap:P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I kow that a lot of people are probably going to have to reread the whole thing to remember what happened, but I only just wrote this last bit. Seriously, yesterday and today. I really really hope to see this through to publishing. Cross your fingers for me! I think that peggstarr's announcment has really shown me that it can be done by normal people who weren't born famous authors. Thanks for sticking with it! |
| Nedaf |
05/06/06 - 10:13AM |
7: 7 |
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Well then this is the first review of the chapter! I like it! Especially the end-part where Aaron is so confused. Made me laugh! I really like the characters so far, and I like that it's not solely about killing vampires and the next big bad as Buffy so often is. (Well, especially in the first couple of seasons anyways.) And I like the name Brayden... It's not that common is it? Very nice!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you like it so far, and I really tried to put in more than just the vampire stuff, without making it ramble. And no, the name Brayden isn't very common. I'm glad you like it! |
| CelesteAvonne |
04/06/06 - 11:07PM |
1: Begining |
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| I've only read the first chapter, but I'm intrigued. Hope to read more soon. Do please continue it. Your characters are solid, and that's a good start for a great story. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/26/06 - 09:06AM |
4: 4 |
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| I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm interested in Brayden already - wonder who he is, how he knows Kara ... plus the whole dynamic of the love triangle is pretty cool too. That could definitely add some tension later on ... but from the way you're describing it so far, it seems like Aaron would want the committment, while Brayden and Kara's intimate relationship is limited to the friends with benefits thing. So, it'll be really interesting to see how that plays out. And again, I just want to tell you that you're playing Aaron's reaction to finding Emily just right, I think. You're making it a very realistic reaction. So, again, I just want to tell you I'm really, really interested to see where this story goes. Like I said before, not a dull moment yet - every chapter, there's something going on that hooks me in and makes me want to read more. So, great chapter, I can't wait for the next update!! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/23/06 - 05:44PM |
3: 3 |
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| I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked the dialogue between Kara and Aaron. And again the pacing doesn't let up - its quick and to the point, which I enjoy. There hasn't been a dull moment yet in this story. As for Aaron's reaction to Emily, I just want to commend you on really great writing there. You played it just right with his reaction, and it was believable. I like that you didn't just try to make him this macho alpha male that wouldn't be bothered by a body. Another solid chapter, and I'm looking forward to more! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/22/06 - 07:08PM |
2: 2 |
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| No actually, you know what, I went back and reread the end of the chapter, and I think I just read a little too much into his wanting to protect her until the day he died. But then, sometimes, I think my mind has a tendency to read what isn't actually there cuz its just weird like that. So, yeah, skip that part on my last review ... everything else still applies - great chapter! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/22/06 - 05:19PM |
2: 2 |
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First off, great chapter. There was a good bit of action that kept the whole chapter quickly but evenly paced. I loved the scene with Kara’s father – again, adding a little more to that back story, but withholding enough to really up the interest in the whole deal with her father and everything that happened that brought Kara to this point in her life. That said, there’s one thing I want to point out. I enjoyed the scene with Aaron and Kara at the end. It was a touching moment, and again, I love how it’s slowly building the romantic tension between those two. I’m just not sure I believe Aaron would be ready to lay down his life for Kara so soon. I can understand his protective instinct after hearing what happened to her, but I’m not sure I can understand why he’d already be willing to put down his own life for her. I liked that he felt that way, but I feel that maybe that declaration should wait for a few more chapters until we see their relationship grow more. Again though, overall, it’s a solid chapter that carries the plot well and makes me want to know more. And that’s the most important thing – having a plot that keeps the reader turning the page.
Author's Response: I get where you're coming from, but Aaron isn't saying that he'd die for Kara. He's saying that he'll stick by her side, no matter what, and that he doesn't care what kind of "demons" she has in her past. I don't think I would have him lay down his life for her yet. Let me know if I should make that fact more clear. Thanks for the review! |
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