Reviews for Angel, the Sixth Season
| Angels Shadow |
03/27/06 - 05:13PM |
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Wow ... that just completely blew me away. Long first chapter, but well worth it. I'm not usually a fan of script format for reasons I really can't explain, but I was sucked in within the first minute or two of reading, and I couldn't stop. The amazing thing is that I could see that as an actual episode. Your grasp on characterization is unbelievable ... to say the least. I could actually hear each of them talking - it was right on the money, especially with Spike. I'll admit I'm hooked - this is one heck of a story, and I feel as though I just read a script for the actual show ... by no means an easy accomplishment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the r&r, i always love a good review. My goal is to as closely follow TV-esque presentation as i can, so naturally dialouge is heavily stressed. I'm just glad I'm getting it right, expecially with Spike (he's my fav). Thanks again for taking the time to read it, I know it's a bit longer than most (but script format really flies by =) ). |
| axel |
03/18/06 - 12:42PM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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So whistler wants to kill Illyria too? does anybody but me, think he's evil, and always has been? Anyway good work. I wonder how it's going to go.
Author's Response: Heh...Whistler is kinda sketchy....but we'll just see how it works out. Thanks for the review. |
| Icequeen |
03/14/06 - 06:24PM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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| Wow. Wow...that was amazing! It seemed like it could have been what actually happened. The whole dialogue with Angel and Buffy after the battle seemed true to character. I could see where Angel was coming from and it was like something that he would say. Great job!! |
| the_mayor_evil |
03/14/06 - 11:51AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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Cool first chapter. Long first chapter. But cool. I like that certain characters are being kept around. I think they'll really help fill the void left by the deaths of Wesley, Cordy, and Fred. (Illyria is a different character than Fred, you know). You definitely have a knack for dialogue and the characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I agree, it's tough to fill the character void with the loss of Cordelia, Wesley and Fred. And as much as i loved those characters, I appreciate the chance to develop less familiar ones like Oz and Nina. |
| filmtheory |
03/09/06 - 05:29PM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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Great story. Although I never liked Whistler, you more than made up for him by including all of my favorite characters. More importantly, the plot, action, and dialogue were all top notch. You're really good at writing the characters. Glad to see the second chapter's already up and I hope the third is soon to come.
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I've been a fan of your work for quite some time, so it's nice to hear positive feedback from you. And the third one will be up by the middle of next week, at the latest. |
| Kevin |
03/08/06 - 06:50PM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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Wow! I love how you threw the names into the credits (despite the fact I’m such a geek that I know who all those actors are and therefore knew they were in the story). Big fan of ALL those characters (other than Buffy , actually). Nice to see Whistler and Nina added to the opening credits. It was awesome having all the slayers jump in the fight. It was also awesome to have Connor back, even though his future now seems uncertain. Great start to the story. Hope you keep rolling with it big time!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, especially from the author of the renowned Angel Season 5 redux! |
| Peaches Girl |
03/06/06 - 10:48PM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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Wow, I loved it. You have really captured the feelings and fun in this fic. I love the part with Spike trying to explain feeling bad to Illyria. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I try to put emphasis on character relations and such. Hope its working out! |
| twinblade |
03/06/06 - 08:12AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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| excellent work, I do so hope you keep it up. RTF |
| Spicule |
03/04/06 - 09:37AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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| Sorry about the summary, i guess i got carried away in trying to draw a crowd. I'll shorten it to teaster length next time. Speaking of next time, episode 2 is in the works as we speak. I think I'll post the teaser (pre-credits) today so you can have a hint as to whats to come.
And thanks for the feedback! |
| spikes girl |
03/04/06 - 03:35AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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Can i just say... DAMN! that was awesome! i agree about the summary, was a tad on the longish side, but the story itself, was so fantastic. You wrote everything so well that i could picture it all unfolding clearly in my mind. You write the dialogue so true to the characters that everythings just seems natural. i found myself wishing a few times that this was actually on TV to watch, as it is written better then a lot of the actual angel eps.
I love the lenght of the fic, nice and long, and cannot wait to see where you take this in the next episode! great start!
Author's Response: Just discovered this "author's response" thing...And thank you very much! It's these kind of reviews that keep me going. |
| Angel1919 |
03/04/06 - 01:14AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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| oh, and i forgot to ask, when is the second one coming out? Cause the first one kick ass!! Thanks for sharing! |
| Angel1919 |
03/04/06 - 12:47AM |
1: 6x01 Covenant |
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ok, don't take this as bashing or anything, cause i wouldn't do that, ok? ok! So i read the summary on the recently added page, and i wanted to pass up your story before i even read it. With the summarys, there suppose to be like a teaser, not your entire (literaly) story in a nutshell. ok, that didn't make sence, well, i liked the story very much, you just had an extremely long summary. Keep it up. (seriously, i wasn't trying to say anything bad, just trying to help.)
Author's Response: None at all. I welcome constructive criticism, even if it's about a summary. I hope you keep an interest in the series, and thanks for the review. |
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