Reviews for Discipline
| MissEdith |
03/02/06 - 03:59PM |
9: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part 1 |
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| Excellent chapter. I loved all the different perspectives presented in it. And what an ending! Buffy had better show up and save Willow! Or Sirk. Or Jeremiah. Or Snyder (hehe). |
| Peaches Girl |
03/01/06 - 10:18PM |
9: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part 1 |
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Ok, I get it. They are being taken over by the ghosts right, I think I may be right. Anyway great update. Post sooner please.
Author's Response: Thanks! Well... like I said, this is going somewhere, but yeah, it's the dialogue from the ghost episode. I'll try to have part 2 up in a not-too-distant future... less than a month, anyway. |
| axel |
03/01/06 - 07:07PM |
9: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part 1 |
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Damn, Oz evil. I guess everybody goes evil , after a wile. (OK I know he's not really evil, but close enough) Good (Evil) Work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I do my best to be evil. Or is that "worst"? |
| Raven |
03/01/06 - 07:04PM |
9: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part 1 |
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Oh, your evil! Is he really going to do it?
Author's Response: Hmmm... *plotting evilly*... we'll see. Thanks! |
| slayerfest |
03/01/06 - 06:51PM |
9: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part 1 |
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This review was terrifying until I stopped and deleted it all. Let's just say it's really, really good, and you should really write more, and soon, please. However, I'm a little bit muddled about some things. Maybe it's the meticulous lack of updates (hint hint), but... I'm not sure. There's something about it that just doesn't sit well with me. When I figure it out, I'll let you know.
Author's Response: Thanks for r&r-ing! And if you do find out what it is that doesn't quite work, please let me know, because I agree - something about it seems ever so slightly off to me. I keep thinking there's something I've forgotten. I guess that's why it's taken me so long to pick it up again. |
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