Reviews for Mistaken Identitiy
| Acila |
03/21/06 - 09:35PM |
1: "Mr Mysterio or whatever" |
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I like were your going with this story, It's got a interesting concept to it, You should update soon, because I'd be interested in reading more ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! I am writing more right now and i will hopefully have an update up by tomorow! |
| Kaoz |
03/01/06 - 08:27PM |
1: "Mr Mysterio or whatever" |
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i couldn't get past your first sentences because what you're trying to say is not being said.
1. Your tenses are confusing.
2. Spelling. ie.
a) their is suppossed to be there.
b) leant is suppossed to be leaned.
Please use what the school taught you and not what spell check tells you. It's not always right you know.
Author's Response: Oh god thanks for pointing those out! I wouldnt have noticed if you hadnt of said! I sort of didnt read my work through, im also gonna turn off spell check. Thanks for giving me constructive critisism, more people ought to that. |
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