Reviews for Mistaken Identitiy
| CelesteAvonne |
05/02/06 - 09:58PM |
4: sorry-message from scaredycat |
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| Happy birthday!! |
| Psyche2 |
04/18/06 - 11:04AM |
4: sorry-message from scaredycat |
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| Happy B-day, although its probably too late. Update when you can! |
| Peaches Girl |
04/17/06 - 10:28PM |
4: sorry-message from scaredycat |
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| Awe, Happy Birthday!! Now get to the updatin. LOL, JK. Update when you can, but hurry. |
| Spicule |
04/01/06 - 08:41PM |
3: get a soulectomy? |
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Pretty cool story so far, I like the fast pace of it (sometimes long fanfics can be hard on the eyes). And i love the Spanish at the end (roughly translated:) "Goddess Gaia hear my call, the one that is known as Angelus, does he have a soul? Does he have a conscience, does he have a soul? Give me a sign! Tell me! Tell me! Tell me!
Author's Response: Yes! Spanish is the only other language other than English which i am ok at. I will hopefully update soon! |
| Psyche2 |
03/30/06 - 05:27PM |
3: get a soulectomy? |
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Interesting...very interesting! Good Job, can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was a short update but i thought i needed to! Hopefully i will update really soon as all my midterms all all over! Yay! |
| Acila |
03/21/06 - 09:35PM |
1: "Mr Mysterio or whatever" |
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I like were your going with this story, It's got a interesting concept to it, You should update soon, because I'd be interested in reading more ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! I am writing more right now and i will hopefully have an update up by tomorow! |
| Kaoz |
03/01/06 - 08:27PM |
1: "Mr Mysterio or whatever" |
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i couldn't get past your first sentences because what you're trying to say is not being said.
1. Your tenses are confusing.
2. Spelling. ie.
a) their is suppossed to be there.
b) leant is suppossed to be leaned.
Please use what the school taught you and not what spell check tells you. It's not always right you know.
Author's Response: Oh god thanks for pointing those out! I wouldnt have noticed if you hadnt of said! I sort of didnt read my work through, im also gonna turn off spell check. Thanks for giving me constructive critisism, more people ought to that. |
| Dwarfer |
03/01/06 - 03:07PM |
2: "I don't tut!" |
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Well done, guess who?
Keep going with it, sounds like it's heading in a very interesting direction.
Well done Lou,
Dwarfer
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It makes me want to write more! I'm trying to make it interesting so that people want to read on! |
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