Reviews for The Horror Of It All: Welcome To The Slaughterhouse
| goolcap |
06/19/06 - 05:35PM |
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glad you caught them, inevitably this story would have to feature some mohra demon blood, Ted Rami and Sam's Oldsmobile somewhere along the line!
Author's Response: Heh, how that car still is in one piece I will never know. (Just so we're clear, though: I do not want you to write a "happy ending" fic for this story. Nothing against you as a writer, I just prefer my stories to be... well, mine.) |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/19/06 - 04:25PM |
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This chapter was brought to you by Poulan - the premier manufacturer of durable, high performance and affordable chain saws. With innovation like our SuperCleanｮ system and exclusive features such as our DuraChromeｮ cylinders make our saws run smoother, cleaner, and longer. Ha ha that right there is priceless. it felt like i was watching a commercial reading that. I just gone done reading the entire fic and i will tell you this its the most goriest, sickest and most disturbing fic i have ever read and i mean that as a compliment. i wonder the whole time i was reading it what kind of sick demented twisted mind you have to write something like this. even with all the gore it made the fic very awesome and fun as hell to read. Is there gonna be a sequel? it would be awesome if there was. You did a kick ass job
Author's Response: HA! Thanks! It IS a commercial - I copied it straight from Poulan's homepage. As for sequel... well, the problem is I've killed everyone off, and I'm NOT bringing any of them back. So as fascinating as the idea of Dawn The Chainsaw Killer is (sorry goolcap, no demons to fight in Texas) I think I'll pass. For now, at least. But glad to hear you liked it! |
| goolcap |
06/19/06 - 03:05PM |
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let me show you what I mean;
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The demons clustered around her, each eager to be the one to slaughter the newly ressurected Slayer. Buffy trembled, no match for them in her weakened state, her strength and abilities needing a few minutes to return. Her fear turned to abject terror as she heard the sound of a chainsaw behind her, bringing back the awful memory of her death.
Dawn stepped in between Buffy and her attackers. She wore short-shorts and a cut off T-shirt that would have made Lara Croft blush. In one hand was the chainsaw, in the other a sawn-off shotgun bearing the imprint S-MART on it's butt. She loaded it with two rounds from the cartridge belt she wore around her waist and snapped it shut.
"No one harms my sister ever again!" she pronounced.
The demons froze with fear at the very sight of her.
"D-dawn" one stammered, his voice hoarse with dread.
"The DEATHBRINGER!" exclaimed another one in recognition, fleeing for his life.
Half ran. The others tried to fight. Dawn butchered them mercilessly, limbs, heads and vile demon blood showering everywhere.
Buffy watched her little sister effortlessly exterminate them all. Joyce's little girl was all grown up.
When she was finished Dawn holstered her weapons and turned to Buffy.
"Give me some sugar, baby" she quipped.
The sisters embraced, smiling radiant smiles, all the love in the world between them.
"Groovy!" thought Dawn.
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I suspect you're just as much an Evil Dead fan as I am so I hope you get the references. I hope you realise I'd managed kick my fanfic writing addiction until you and axel came along. now if you'll excuse me I have to go call my sponsor!
Author's Response: Yup, I did catch the references. Except I'm not bringing Buffy back. Except maybe as a deadite. Buffy the Braineater. "I'll swallow your soul! I'll swallow your soul! And then go shopping!" |
| goolcap |
06/19/06 - 05:08AM |
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| oh I'm not saying that Dawnie won't become an unstoppable killing machine, but it's the demons who'd better watch out, little sis can fill big sis' shoes |
| axel |
05/21/06 - 10:37PM |
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By the way, yes I said Kill Buffy. But then I said forget I said that. So it's not my fault people. Give all your hate, to Beer, not me. Just kidding. By the way. after caruful considrati0on. I'm putting My Halloween story on hold (Maybe forever. Michael just doesn't work in print.) And rewriting Nightmare. I think you were right at the end, when you said it was to rush. Since I'm not doing a sequel, I'm going back, and doing this. It will be basicly the same, until the middle, then change. And it may not end the same. Just though you'd like to know. Later.
Author's Response: Looking forward to it! Really like that fic. |
| always angel |
02/28/06 - 10:57PM |
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I think I know who the bad guys are but i'm not gonna give it away. This is going to be a very interesting story. Update soon.
Author's Response: "Interesting" is one way of putting it, I guess. But it's going to be a lot of fun to write. Hope you stick with it even when the gore starts, and thanks for reviewing! |
| axel |
02/28/06 - 07:10PM |
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May make Terry puke? (What have I done?!) Thanks for taking it up. And yes, I think I know, who the bad guys are.
Author's Response: Well, since you know where we're headed, you know what these people do for a living... *evil grin* Oh, and just to reassure you, this won't be the crappy remake either. Thanks for reviewing! |
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