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Reviews for The Horror Of It All: Welcome To The Slaughterhouse

axel	07/04/06 - 10:52PM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
Well, it is possible I haven't heard of him, and he's still popular in America. I live in East Tennessee, where your choices in radio are Country, Country, Old Shcool Country (Strage how the Old School stations only plays new artist) and Rap. There is one classic rock staion, that only plays Skynard, and ZZ Top. (Nothing aganist ether band, but I like varity) So as a result I mostly listen to CDs. And the only Music channel I like is VH1 Classics. I do have a colection of new artist, but none of them get played on radio. So I'm out of the loup a little. Anyway I'm ranting.

MonsieurRipper	07/02/06 - 02:44AM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
Aawww no! Don't hate on James! You're Beautiful is so pretty! Maybe it's a female thing... But I love James Blunt! Author's Response: It's GOTTA be a female thing. Like Hugh Grant movies. That Y chromosome in men just starts sending out "Vomit! Vomit!" whenever "You're Beautiful" comes on.

axel	06/28/06 - 01:29PM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
James Blunt? Who the hell is that? Author's Response: Oh, don't tell me you US folks haven't been exposed to James Blunt? You lucky lucky bastards. He's a British soft-pop singer with a huge hit called "You're Beautiful" and sounds like a castrated Rod Stewart. There are news stories of how coma victims wake up miraculously when they hear the song (my guess is their first words are "Is this Hell?"). Basically, he needs to die. Painfully. I'll trade him for Scott Stapp anyday.

MonsieurRipper	06/28/06 - 12:27AM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
BRAVO. That was wonderfully twisted. It reminds me of this story I read once, very similar, except there was no Leatherface locking them in a room. I don't remember what it was called, but it was about 6 people who got lost on a camping/hiking bit. It also reminded me of Lord of the Flies for some reason or other... Anyways, BRAVO! Author's Response: Hmmm... doesn't sound familiar. I did sort of rip off a Stephen King story called "The Survivor Type" with the ending, but... "Lord Of The Flies" is a great book, though. Thanks!

BelovedSlayer	06/27/06 - 11:45PM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
I'm just gonna say this that was the sickest, more disturbing chapter of any fic i ever read besides the rest of the story and i mean that as a compliment. Enough said Author's Response: Uh, thanks! :-)

axel	06/27/06 - 10:09PM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
Oh, one more thing. As far as Faith, and Riley, I hate that idea, but just because I hate ANY man with her, if he's not me. Yes Riley was boring, but I never hated the guy. To be honest I forgot about him, until I saw how many people hated him. Author's Response: I don't really hate Riley either, but he is incredibly dull. Oh well. Thanks!

axel	06/27/06 - 10:04PM	10: Sick, Twisted And Evil Alternate Ending: Off With Her Head	Signed
Ladies, and Getalmen. I am here by public denouce Beer Good. Wile I m a life long horror fan, I can not, in good concoisous aprove of such sick, ans twited filth. Wile I hate to say this, I think he should posibly be removed from the site. Beer, I've been a fan, but this was WAY to far. I mean listening to COLDPLAY, FOREVER! Just the thought is HELL! Ok all kidding aside that was pretty messed up. I was actualy ok, until Tara well, you know. Don't get me wrong, it was good, but DAMN. Of coarse there has been sicker, but this seems worse, because we didn't want them to die. So it's scary, and that's the point. But at Least FAITH'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Maybe, but Kennedy still had that accident. >:-) Also, could be worse. I hear there's a James Blunt hell too.

always angel	06/19/06 - 10:45PM	9: The Saw Is Family	Signed
Good ending. I'm glad things worked out for them, though Riley might be in trouble if he doesn't watch out. Author's Response: He might well be, yeah. I have absolutely no problem with that idea. I've already had Dawn kill him once in another story, so what happens after "The end" here is... well... uh... Thanks!

MonsieurRipper	06/19/06 - 09:06PM	9: The Saw Is Family	Signed
Awesome story. Will, Dawn and Tara are killing? (Sorry I know the question's been asked) I like the idea of Dawn with a chainsaw, but not as much as Tara with a chainsaw. So anyways, good ending. It leaves enough to the imagination so that you smile a little, knowingly, even though you don't know, you know? heh. You killed Faith??? WHY?????? Faith is too sexy to die:( Author's Response: Like I said, well, that's up for interpretation... I always love endings that just give hints of what might happen. Suffice to say that Dawn isn't quite right in the head, no. As for Faith, hey, different story. Let's just say it was a good death. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

axel	06/19/06 - 07:05PM	9: The Saw Is Family	Signed
Great stoy, even if you did pussy out just a bit Ha just kidding. I think Riley might be dinner, if he's not carful. Oh, and I don't think you violated the bashing rule, since It wasn't about hating Dawn. But Does this mean Will, and Tara are killing now? Again, good work. Ps, one more thing (Axel kicks Beer hard, in the nuts) YOU KILLED MY FAITH! YOU SON OF A BITCH! SHE WASN'T EVEN PART OF THE STORY, JACKASS! (Axel beats him, without mercy)AAAHHHAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: shrugs Axel off Hey, would you prefer if she and Riley got together? It was either that or kill her, sorry, and I think you'll agree I made the right choice. (Oh, and Kennedy got run over by a car while crossing a street in NYC.) As for whether Willow and Tara are in on whatever is happening to Dawn... well, who knows. I'll just leave that up to my esteemed reader's imagination. Thanks!

goolcap	06/19/06 - 05:35PM	1: I’m Gonna Bring You Back	Signed
glad you caught them, inevitably this story would have to feature some mohra demon blood, Ted Rami and Sam's Oldsmobile somewhere along the line! Author's Response: Heh, how that car still is in one piece I will never know. (Just so we're clear, though: I do not want you to write a "happy ending" fic for this story. Nothing against you as a writer, I just prefer my stories to be... well, mine.)

BelovedSlayer	06/19/06 - 04:25PM	1: I’m Gonna Bring You Back	Signed
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This chapter was brought to you by Poulan - the premier manufacturer of durable, high performance and affordable chain saws. With innovation like our SuperClean® system and exclusive features such as our DuraChrome® cylinders make our saws run smoother, cleaner, and longer. Ha ha that right there is priceless. it felt like i was watching a commercial reading that. I just gone done reading the entire fic and i will tell you this its the most goriest, sickest and most disturbing fic i have ever read and i mean that as a compliment. i wonder the whole time i was reading it what kind of sick demented twisted mind you have to write something like this. even with all the gore it made the fic very awesome and fun as hell to read. Is there gonna be a sequel? it would be awesome if there was. You did a kick ass job Author's Response: HA! Thanks! It IS a commercial - I copied it straight from Poulan's homepage. As for sequel... well, the problem is I've killed everyone off, and I'm NOT bringing any of them back. So as fascinating as the idea of Dawn The Chainsaw Killer is (sorry goolcap, no demons to fight in Texas) I think I'll pass. For now, at least. But glad to hear you liked it!

goolcap	06/19/06 - 03:05PM	1: I’m Gonna Bring You Back	Signed
let me show you what I mean; * The demons clustered around her, each eager to be the one to slaughter the newly ressurected Slayer. Buffy trembled, no match for them in her weakened state, her strength and abilities needing a few minutes to return. Her fear turned to abject terror as she heard the sound of a chainsaw behind her, bringing back the awful memory of her death. Dawn stepped in between Buffy and her attackers. She wore short-shorts and a cut off T-shirt that would have made Lara Croft blush. In one hand was the chainsaw, in the other a sawn-off shotgun bearing the imprint S-MART on it's butt. She loaded it with two rounds from the cartridge belt she wore around her waist and snapped it shut. "No one harms my sister ever again!" she pronounced. The demons froze with fear at the very sight of her. "D-dawn" one stammered, his voice hoarse with dread. "The DEATHBRINGER!" exclaimed another one in recognition, fleeing for his life. Half ran. The others tried to fight. Dawn butchered them mercilessly, limbs, heads and vile demon blood showering everywhere. Buffy watched her little sister effortlessly exterminate them all. Joyce's little girl was all grown up. When she was finished Dawn holstered her weapons and turned to Buffy. "Give me some sugar, baby" she quipped. The sisters embraced, smiling radiant smiles, all the love in the world between them. "Groovy!" thought Dawn. * I suspect you're just as much an Evil Dead fan as I am so I hope you get the references. I hope you realise I'd managed kick my fanfic writing addiction until you and axel came along. now if you'll excuse me I have to go call my sponsor! Author's Response: Yup, I did catch the references. Except I'm not bringing Buffy back. Except maybe as a deadite. Buffy the Braineater. "I'll swallow your soul! I'll swallow your soul! And then go shopping!"

goolcap	06/19/06 - 05:08AM	1: I’m Gonna Bring You Back	Signed
oh I'm not saying that Dawnie won't become an unstoppable killing machine, but it's the demons who'd better watch out, little sis can fill big sis' shoes

goolcap	06/19/06 - 04:52AM	9: The Saw Is Family	Signed
wouldn't be fair to give a review if I didn't read the whole thing. it's OK, got faith in my little dawnie, she's been through a lot before but she pulls through, she's Buffy and Joyce's little girl Author's Response: Rats. Should have made ending more obviously creepy. >:-)

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