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MissEdith 02/28/06 - 04:55PM 1: Introduction Signed
This story looks very promising so far. Your English looks pretty good to me. I just have one little spelling mistake to correct: 'the pants being just a little to long for her legs"- that should be "too" not "to".

Author's Response: I've changed the spelling mistake. Thanks for telling me, and thank you for reviewing! :)
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