Reviews for Seasick
| Acila |
07/25/06 - 11:59AM |
9: A new ship |
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| oh my goodness I loved this update. This is one of my Fav. Stories, pirates are a small obsession of mine so this story is amazing. wonderful update, please update soon!!! |
| Stakemenow |
07/05/06 - 12:55PM |
9: A new ship |
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| really good... update soon |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
05/20/06 - 03:01PM |
9: A new ship |
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| I love this story. It's really cute, can't wait for more! |
| MissEdith |
04/25/06 - 04:26PM |
9: A new ship |
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Oooh, Angel knows. Just gotta say now--I really hope you don't villify Angel. Too many Spuffy writers make Angel the bad guy (and vice versa). And Spike and Buffy really ought to be more careful about letting her secret slip!
Author's Response: Yes they really should be more careful... And Angel... well, I can't tell too much about the future there, wouldn't want to spoil the plot ;) |
| Acila |
04/16/06 - 12:38PM |
8: Time to leave |
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| Anouther great chappie, anouther great update. I'm sad to see Giles leave though, and I was more then suprised when you made Angel the captain of the Alma....These are going to be some interesting turn of events. Cant wait to read more, and I'm glad you stuck to Dru's character. |
| MissEdith |
03/19/06 - 08:05PM |
6: A girl in every port? |
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| Wow, you're getting home from NY the day before I'm leaving for NY! I'm amused.
Very nice chapter, even if it was a tad short. Even though I'm not primarily a BS fan, I like what you're doing with this. I hope you continue to have it progress slowly but steadily. |
| Acila |
03/14/06 - 04:21PM |
5: After the storm |
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Ooo I love this story, have you ever read the book Pirates by Celia Reese, you would love it, based on how your writing this story, there not similiar but they have to do with women in pirates life and its a really good book....anyway getting side tracked. I wanna give you some advice, I havn't found anything wrong grammer or spelling wise but it would be easier to read if you spaced out your quotations instead of bunching everything togeather....to get an Idea of what Im saying I have alog of dialog in my story Vindiction and I put spaces between it to make it easier to read. Other then that I love the story and Can't wait for an update, you really are a amazing writer :D
Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review my story! =)
I haven't read that book, I might look in to it once I have finished writing this story. (I try not to read other stories dealing with the same kind of subject that I write about - I usually lose my inspiration for the story if I find something too similar.)
I know a lot of people think it's easier to read if there's more space... The problem is that I think it's harder to read stories with a lot of space, so I can't write that way myself. I really appreciate your comment and I will think about it - maybe I have to change the way I write a bit. (It's hard to change a lifetime of habit though :D) |
| MissEdith |
03/12/06 - 11:10AM |
4: The Storm |
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And now he knows she's a girl, if he didn't before. Very good chapter.
Author's Response: =) thank you |
| Fighter78 |
03/03/06 - 11:28PM |
2: Life at sea |
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This is really good keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thank you |
| MissEdith |
02/28/06 - 04:55PM |
1: Introduction |
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This story looks very promising so far. Your English looks pretty good to me. I just have one little spelling mistake to correct: 'the pants being just a little to long for her legs"- that should be "too" not "to".
Author's Response: I've changed the spelling mistake. Thanks for telling me, and thank you for reviewing! :) |
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