Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)
| Spicule |
03/05/06 - 02:01PM |
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This one, like the rest, is quite solid. I like the original slant you have on the season. My only complaint would be that fact that Spike isn't a regular. I know, I know, it's all about personal preference when it comes to Blondie Bear. But considering that's my only complaint, I'd say you've done very well with this season. Nice job
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. BTW, what makes you say Spike isn’t a regular? True, he hasn’t been in it until this chapter. It’s also true that I was bugged by how he kind of dominated Angel’s 5th season. But I think I still want to have him around. I just didn’t like the kind of short cut the season had for getting him back. Granted, I’m being obnoxiously arrogant, but I think my way of getting Spike back was much better than the show’s. Then again, I didn’t need him in the first episode/ chapter, so I did have more time to work with. Anyway, I really appreciate the time you took to read and review my story. Another chapter is on the way hopefully soon. |
| dutchgirl |
03/04/06 - 01:43PM |
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Poor Wesley, neverthelss I do hope he smashes the box ^^! Wonder if Connor is going to regain his memories as well since he is not in the room!! I like the new and improved version but I also loved the old version. I pretty much liked the original out come, two versions becoming one version. Can't wait to find out what your plans are, also concerning Fred/Connor! You write a very convincing Sahjhan and Drusilla's return could lead to a great plotline. Woudn't have minded to have seen more of your helldimension because it rocked very dark and creepy!! Great chapter, update soon ^^!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. *IF* the box is what you think it is (who am I kidding; it is) and if they made it correctly, only the people in the presence of the box will get their memories back. However, I too like the new Connor but prefer the old. Some Fred/ Connor plans will be revealed in the next chapter. I'm glad you like Sahjhan. I liked that character. Dru is always a fun and welcome addition. Now I just need to work her into the story a little better. Thanks so much for the compliments on my hell dimension! Maybe they'll have a filed trip back some time. Or, maybe I'll be writing about another hell dimension. Hmmmm . . . thanks again so much for reading and for reviewing!
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| Quortoth |
03/02/06 - 12:33PM |
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I much enjoyed this one. And I think I even understand the inside joke. Of course I'm not for sure, [smash it, Gwen? :-P] I also liked the duck tape and intestines joke with Spike. And Sahjun with whole 'paying for it,' client. Good story.
Author's Response: Glad you think you get the inside joke. You should post and tell everyone what you think it is :) I'm always so, so worried my jokes won't come across in writing, so I'm glad the banter is garnering appreciation. Thanks for the review! |
| twinblade |
02/28/06 - 09:09AM |
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I liked this chapter a great deal. I actually hope you do more with Harmony. I've met Mercedes Mcnab and she was such a sweetheart I tend to think Harm needs more screen time (Screen time...get it. Ha ha)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think I will work Harmony in a little more, I'm just having trouble at the moment. I have htis plot idea for her, but it just keeps getting pushed back. |
| axel |
02/27/06 - 07:31PM |
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Good as always. But I'm just a little disapointed, that Gwen seems to be going evil. But it's a small complaint. And yes, I got the Joke.
Author's Response: I don't htink Gwen is going evil. She's just doing what's she 's always done; working for the highest bidder. Besides, maybe releasing Sahjhan wasn't really evil. Hmmmmm . . . Glad you got the joke. |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
02/27/06 - 06:26PM |
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Sorry for the double review!! I messed up last time. Cordy's line when she says the word US was the one you messed up, not Freds. “My visions us led us this far."
SS4EVA
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. Glad you caught the snag. |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
02/27/06 - 06:22PM |
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Nice. Liked this chapter. Felt that it was kind of missing action though - and not just physical but emotional.
Found 4 punctuation mistakes in the first scene, should go back and fix that. Also, one of Fred's lines, you left off an S (in the first scene).
I liked the Darla bit, did not get the inside joke cuz I didn't watch the movie and really wished there'd been a little more Fred/Connor scenes. Emotional, I mean - not physical.
Er, the box at the end - OMG! I sooo don't want them to smash it. Maybe someone could find out about it and steal it. I hope that, at least, EVERYONE doesn't find out about Connor's true orgins - I don't think everything's set for that. Things have just started. I also don't remember seeing Gunn in this chapter - where is he again?
I can't help but wonder what the Sahjan storyline is...and Dru!! I heart Dru!
Really hope the next chapter is more focused on Connor and his journey . Hope to also see maybe an Angel/Connor scene where Connor doesn't know that Angel is his father.
SS4EVA
Author's Response: I laid off the acton in this one because there was a lot of plot development; getting Spike back, Sahjhan's return, Gwen looking to get paid, etc. I didn't want the chapter to run too long. The inside joke had nothing to do with any movies. Gunn was in the chapter, he just didn't do much. As for the box . . . all good things come to an end. |
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