Reviews for Lost Angels
| GDO |
07/04/06 - 08:23PM |
2: Chapter Two: Welcome to the City of Angels |
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I'm most worried about Gunn.
Author's Response: So am I! |
| GDO |
07/04/06 - 08:23PM |
1: Chapter One: Boys Suck |
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Wow. Grim, but you are good at building up the characters, giving them real personalities. I don't mind how Spike is being portrayed, though Buffy...but I'm interested in more
Author's Response: There will be more Buffy eventually. All of the characters are being portrayed a little bit off of their usual selves. |
| Nedaf |
02/24/06 - 12:34PM |
1: Chapter One: Boys Suck |
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I really like the story so far! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hoped to update this past weekend, but real life can suck sometimes. |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
02/23/06 - 08:55PM |
1: Chapter One: Boys Suck |
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Nice start. Looking forward to more. I can't help but wonder where this is going . Adivice: don't make Dawn a porn star in LA - and if you do, do it on the sly. I've seen it done a million times before and it gets old fast. Dawn wouldn't just give it up all that easily.
I was totally shocked by Connor's characterization. Connor's oone of my fav characters -and you made me hate him. Chris? Was that the same guy Dawn did?
And Conn's a porno star? That's actually pretty cool...Where's Angel? Why's Spike such a ****?
Want more soon.
SS4EVA
Author's Response: Dawn's not going to be a porn star, no. That would be weird. I kind of set Connor up to be this guardian of people who wind up in the bad part of LA but don't want to be in the life. You hate Connor? Poor Connor. He's not all bad. Promise. Angel will be along eventually. I never really liked Spike much. That's probably why he's such a ****. Thanks for writing. |
| axel |
02/23/06 - 08:14PM |
1: Chapter One: Boys Suck |
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You, and Terry (Addictions) should do a story, together. Call it, The Sickest Story Ever! I'm kidding. Anyway good start. Yes, it's dark, but hey, can't be sunshine all the time.
Author's Response: Wow. I'm in the same league as Terry? That's such an honor. A dubious honor, to be sure, but still an honor.
Author's Response: By the way, thanks for mentioning Terry to me. After your review I read his stuff and later e-mailed him. He and I might actually do a story together some time. |
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