Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)
| twinblade |
02/23/06 - 09:41AM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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I can't beleive I missed this fic before today. (though to be honest I only started reading it cause I thought you were keith) Bygones I am now addicted... Did you mention returning the favor.
Author's Response: Glad you made the mistake and especially glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for letting me knw what you thought. I hope to have more up soon. |
| Peaches Girl |
02/22/06 - 10:36PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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I do love this fic. I love Connor and always hoped they would expand on his new life but hey they didnt. Fred and Connor great pairing I love it. Connor is just too adorable. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I think Fred and COnnorgo together nicely. Two cute but not gorgeous, pale, skinny, brown haird kids who really need some comfort in an evil, demon-fighting world. I'm glad you love the fic. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
02/22/06 - 05:56PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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That was a awesome chapter! I like Fred and Connor together, it's really cute! Their personal stories are so similar, great idea! Good idea with Gunn too!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There'll be ups and downs for all relationships in this story and that's all I'm going to say about that! But yes, Fred and Connor have had similar events in their lives. Then again, niether of them know it. |
| Psyche2 |
02/22/06 - 01:56PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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This is really good, I really enjoy it. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll update as fast as I can. I hope you enjoy the rest! |
| Willes |
02/21/06 - 11:56AM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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I just found this story and I have to say I am enjoying it very much. It's well written and the chacarter voices are brilliant!! Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thanks again! |
| Willes |
02/21/06 - 11:55AM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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I just found this story and I have to say I am enjoying it very much. It's well written and the chacarter voices are brilliant!! Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think I probably have Lorne, Cordy, and Connor down, but I worry about some of the other characters. |
| Quortoth |
02/09/06 - 09:41AM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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Spike, Spike, Spike, :-) I'm excited. And I like that Eve and Conner stopped that relationship. Except for the Fred thing, It's a good idea, but kind of icky. [That's just what I think.] But other then that I find the relationship quite funny and enjoyable, I can deal. Spike, I'm glad you're going somewhere with that. Great story I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I’m not quite sure how long it will take to get Spike back. Or even if they’ll get him back. Ooooh. Creepy, huh? I’m sorry that you don’t like Fred and Connor. You’re also against Eve and Connor as well as Cordy and Connor. What’s up with that? You just don’t want this poor kid getting laid at all, do you? Just kidding. Thanks for reading and for sharing your thoughts. I hope to have a new one up before too long. |
| axel |
02/04/06 - 02:40PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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So Gunn's evil Hu? I'm sure Wes won't have a problem, with Connor, and Gunn, HA! Everybody seem's to be after Fred. Good work.
Author's Response: Yeah, Fred is the prima donna. To quote Jimmy Buffett, she's got fins to the left, fins to the right, and she's the only fish in town. Well, except Cordy, but Angel has dibbs on her. |
| angelandbuffy |
02/04/06 - 02:35PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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whoa... thats a cool story, lol i spent like an hour reading all of them from the beginning. REALLY great :D but buffy in there sometime xD lol XD ^_^ GREAT STORY! keep it upp.!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm so happy my story was exciting enough to make you read all of them in one sitting. Buffy may pop up, I'm not sure yet. Thanks also for the review. |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
02/04/06 - 01:12PM |
10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room |
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Let's be truthful, most Connor post-season 5 stories suck. This doesn't. The grammers very good and everything is very realistic + Connor's very In char. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
---"Me?” Fred asked.
“No,” Connor joked. “Someone else named Fred. Any idea where he is?”
Fred looked at Connor blankly.
“That was sarcasm,” Connor said. “Yes. You. I was looking for you.”" This was absolutely hilarious!!!!! Fred/Connor, huh? didn't see that one coming. I really hope Connor gets to keep being the hockey star - the "real" Connor's quite boring, being evil and what-not.
--" “Angle, he has a soul.” Spelled Angel wrong
---"season. My sprain my wrist and land me on the disabled list.” Huh??? Think you messed up.
"Of course, if you let her go, I’ll just l" ... Messed up break here.
--"Sooner or later, this would come back to haunt them all. They only way to prevent that was faving it head on." The...facing...
There haven't been that many mistakes before in this story but I suppose this was hot-off-the-press. I'd suggest a beta. All in all, this is a really good story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes, I really could use a beta. Are you offering by any chance? Thanks for reading and reviewing. I’m glad you like the story. I kind of like writing the “normal” Connor. Of course, he has kind of dominated the story more than I’d like. I hated how Spike kind of took over Angel, season 5. I wanted to fix that, and of course wound up doing the same thing with another character. But, for the moment, Connor’s background is kind of the overarching mystery (much the Spike’s return was in the real season 5. Thanks again. I hope you keep reading. |
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