Reviews for Discipline
| slayerfest |
02/04/06 - 01:14AM |
8: Thin Line Between Love And Hate |
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| See, now, to me, the structure of it all steps back into play. I can see the point you're trying to make in this chapter whereas in the last one it was all too jumpy (though don't get me wrong; I'm a huge fan of jumpy. I mean "too" in an "it's making my brain go 'huh?'" sort of way) to form why exactly Buffy acted in such a manner. Anyway, thread's back. Love it to bits. |
| MissEdith |
02/02/06 - 10:07PM |
8: Thin Line Between Love And Hate |
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| Well, you may be sacrificing plot for character development, but it's GOOD character development! As axel said, it sucks to be Spike. I like the confusion about Buffy vs. Darla. Very nice. |
| axel |
02/01/06 - 07:19PM |
8: Thin Line Between Love And Hate |
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| Damn, it sucks to be Spike. |
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