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Reviews for Turning




Tazmo 07/18/06 - 09:24PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Gah it can't be left there, I read the original by mistake just before reading this one and I have to say they both were brilliant, the rewritten however definitely seems to have a more controlled structure to it. It gave me the impression that you know more where this fic is heading, rather than the first verison - which seemed to have more of a random structure. Anyway they're both great examples of some brilliant writing, can't wait for the new parts.

mwjen 01/19/06 - 08:19PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I enjoyed the first version of this story and this rewritten version looks like it is going to be even better.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping for a step forward and not back. ; )

axel 01/18/06 - 07:33PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I liked it. It made you feel for Willow, but at the same time, showed that she kind of trying to blame everyone else, for her problem. Hopfuly Angel (if that was him) can help her. Good Work.
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