Reviews for The Night-Hawk - Series 1
| Raven |
01/23/06 - 06:50PM |
3: 101: Taking Flight – Act 3 |
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Intresting. Slayer, meets the Crow. Kind of suck, that all the other slayers died, though. So far, so good.
Author's Response: thanks. i didn't want to make it too much like the crow but there are definite crow elements. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/19/06 - 04:56PM |
3: 101: Taking Flight – Act 3 |
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I guess Nighthawk, and Waylen, are in trouble now. Maybe he should call the rest, of the Highway Men? (I just lost everybody didn't I?) Good work.
Author's Response: The demon population wasn't just going to lie down and take Wolfram and Harts destruction. where one door closes another opens and The chamber hopes to fill the gap. thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
01/17/06 - 07:40AM |
2: 101: Taking Flight – Act 2 |
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I'm still loving it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you very much. |
| always angel |
01/16/06 - 10:44PM |
2: 101: Taking Flight – Act 2 |
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Ok how the hell did Alex, Rebecca and Angel survive when the others didn't and will Penny find out?
Author's Response: Trust me things will be explained. there are side stories that are going to be running simultaneously in Signum and Night-Hawk which will cover all of this information. the only thing i am going to say is that all Penny saw was blood nothing else. Penny will find out in time. |
| axel |
01/16/06 - 06:06PM |
2: 101: Taking Flight – Act 2 |
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The Slayer will die, by night (Sure) So where back to the most one side fight, of all time. (One slayer, verse all the evil, in the world.) But hey, she has a bird, on her side. (demons, be ware!" Good work.
Author's Response: Don't knock the bird until you seen what powers it's going to give Penny. yep it's going to be three against a couple of dozen. but don't think it's going to be an easy victory for either side. Thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
01/16/06 - 10:30AM |
1: 101: Taking Flight – Act 1 |
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Great start I look forward to more, more, more.
Author's Response: Thanks I'll try not to disappoint. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/16/06 - 12:07AM |
1: 101: Taking Flight – Act 1 |
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Great start. I'm glad you decided to do a Penny series. I love her character so much. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: thanks i liked Penny's character too. thanks for reviewing |
| Peaches Girl |
01/15/06 - 10:16PM |
1: 101: Taking Flight – Act 1 |
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Great start. I like that the bird talks to them, thats really cool. I hope she finds her family ok after the big battle though.
Author's Response: I'm happy how that idea turned out i also wanted to do it in a way where we didn't end up with a talking Animal. as for her family I'll be addressing that next chapter. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/15/06 - 12:35PM |
1: 101: Taking Flight – Act 1 |
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Sorry for the double review, but I wanted to say, the guy from Dukes, was Waylon Jennings. An old country singer, form the seventes.
Author's Response: That's the guy i had in my head and i had to concentrate really hard on to throw in a Y'all. |
| axel |
01/15/06 - 11:41AM |
1: 101: Taking Flight – Act 1 |
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Yeah, I remember, when birds started to talk to me. (They can be real jackasses!). Good so far.
Author's Response: i agree it's all "give me birdseed" and "i want to peck you" and stuff. you know what the funny thing is? when i was writing the Wanderer's speech i had the voice over guy from the dukes of hazzard running through my head. all i needed was a 'them duke boys sure got themselves in trouble' and it wold have be complete. thanks for reviewing |
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