Reviews for The Night-Hawk - Series 1
| twinblade |
02/15/06 - 08:07AM |
12: 104: Asset – Act 1 |
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wonderfull couple of chapters, I'm enjoying this story a lot. Poor Alex though. RTFP (Return The Favor Please)
Author's Response: Yeah but it's for Penny's safety. thanks foe reviewing |
| always angel |
02/13/06 - 05:57PM |
11: 103: Into the fold – Act 4 |
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I understand that they're just trying to protect Penny but it still sucks. Hopefully there'll come a time when its safe for them to see each other again.
Author's Response: Don' t worry it's just temporary they will see each other again. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/13/06 - 05:21PM |
11: 103: Into the fold – Act 4 |
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See Coucil. you may have world wide, power. But Nighthawk has Waylen Jennings, and your just ready for that. (Damn, I hate you, Axel!) Good work. It's sad, that they had to say, she died, but at least Alex can't screw up, this time.
Author's Response: It for her own safety. they're not going to look for her if she's dead. it's lucky The Wanderer knew the pilot huh? thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
02/12/06 - 11:30PM |
10: 103: Into the fold – Act 3 |
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Oh shit. Poor Penny.
Author's Response: Their timing sure does suck. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/12/06 - 07:58PM |
10: 103: Into the fold – Act 3 |
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(Waylen's voice over)Well, old Nighthawk, is in real trouble now. And, the rest of the Chicken, Dumpling Gang, better get there act together. Cause the Coucil ain't playing.
Author's Response: Things look grim now but all hope isn't entirely lost. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/11/06 - 11:33AM |
9: 103: Into the fold – Act 2 |
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Oh, here we go! Let's talk about what EVERYBODY ALREADY KNOW! AAAHHHHAAAA! Sorry, I know you had to do it. And you did as good a job, as anybody could've. But these thing can be painful. Holpful we can get into the action (Everyone caught up now?)
Author's Response: this chapter was for the benefit of people who hadn't read the trilogy. it just saves a lot of explanations. don't worry the next chapter will be full of action. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
02/08/06 - 09:32PM |
8: 103: Into the fold – Act 1 |
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Hmm am I wrong in thinking that Roger is an evil bastard? Poor Penny. I hope the others can save her.
Author's Response: No you're not wrong in thinking that. Rodger is pretty much evil. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/08/06 - 08:13PM |
8: 103: Into the fold – Act 1 |
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Sure, the new Coucil's not evil, Yeah. Good work.
Author's Response: The council is but Rodger might be this is what I'm trying to get across. it's a shame Willow was distracted by Rebecca's virus or else she would have been there on time. |
| Raven |
02/07/06 - 10:59PM |
7: 102: Luthor – Act 4 |
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Yeah, you can join us. It's Ok that you just released a bunch of demons! Really good story.
Author's Response: True but he did save the day and would be a valuable asset regardless. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/05/06 - 10:02PM |
7: 102: Luthor – Act 4 |
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Man, I hate it, when people say I look like Waylen Jennings! Jonhhy Cash, maybe, But! Good Work. And with Willow, and the evil CouciI in it now, guess it's about to hi the fan.
Author's Response: Did you notice the subtle comment there huh? (joking) as for Willow and the council it's now down to who will get to her first. thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
01/30/06 - 06:13AM |
6: 102: Luthor – Act 3 |
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Still loving the Penny story. Any chance of her beau from austrailia (I spelled that wrong) making an appearence? (I think I spelled that wrong too)
Author's Response: i hadn't thought of bringing in Doug but i might consider it. thanks for reviewing |
| Raven |
01/29/06 - 10:48PM |
6: 102: Luthor – Act 3 |
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So people worship Willow, now? Man shew has an ego. Anyway grewat stroy. But who's Waylen? I didn't see anybody named that, in here?
Author's Response: Actually no the Goddess Willow story stems from my fic "Hell on earth: Futures Divided". she was converted permanently into her Goddess form by one of the monks who created Dawn. They don't worship her it's more of a co-ordination thing. Waylan is what Axel calls the wanderer because i said that when i was writing his speech at the beginning of this fic i had the voice over guy from the dukes of hazzard running through my head. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/29/06 - 06:24PM |
6: 102: Luthor – Act 3 |
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Yeah, I had a feeling, it was Willow's coven. Well, I loved Walyen's line, about computers, ending the world. See the country guys, are smarter that you think.
Author's Response: You find a lot of old guys are not big fans of computers especially ones that have things that can jump out and kill you. as for Willow you'll find out what's she's up to later. thanks for reviewing |
| Raven |
01/24/06 - 10:07PM |
4: 102: Luthor – Act 1 |
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Well, everthing's on line now, so why not demons. Good work.
Author's Response: I'll be explaining the origin of the Demon storage later on in this episode. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/24/06 - 08:46PM |
4: 102: Luthor – Act 1 |
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So Penny gets a secret Idenity. Good for her. (Just don't put Waylen, in tights, Ok. That's a scary though, UUHHAA.)
Author's Response: Yeah she gets a secret identity. it goes along with the leather costume she has as nighthawk and don't worry The Wanderer is not going to end up in tights. Thanks for Reviewing |
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