Reviews for Hell on Earth 4: Signum - Series 1
| axel |
01/22/06 - 11:06PM |
5: 102: Black Widow – Act 1 |
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Great! Now Beccy's going to die! All because the Coucil Lied! Good work. I've notied your doing the for episode thing, too
Author's Response: it's a tip I got from filmtheory when i was working on "The zeppo: the series" it's much better then having one 8000 word chapter. As for Willow i wanted to demonstrate how desperate the council had become and what levels the new council would sink to to get what they wanted. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/22/06 - 01:04PM |
1: 101: Insurance - act 1 |
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| I meant to say Mamas, not Maams. |
| axel |
01/22/06 - 12:47PM |
4: 101: Insurance - act 4 |
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Don't worry honey. I'm not helping the slayer (except with traing, and research, And fightin g demons, but that's it.) Yeah, it's not that easy to leave. By the way Nigle, a slayer did survive the battle. She's working with Waylen Jennings now. If fact there relessing a country song. (Maams don't let your Babies grow up, to be Slayers.) Good work.
Author's Response: that's actually not what i meant by lying but i see your point and as for Nighthawk, don't worry, everyone will find everyone else soon. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/18/06 - 01:05AM |
3: 101: Insurance - act 3 |
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I'm glad Nigel is going to help Rebecca now. And poor Heidi I wouldn't want to know everybody's future. Update soon I wanna see what happens at the school.
Author's Response: Will do I'll update asap. Heidi's seer ability is what makes her so shy i think i would be too if i saw what she did. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/17/06 - 11:26PM |
3: 101: Insurance - act 3 |
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Poor Heidi. Make you think, would you really want to know you future? At least Nigle's going to help Rebecca Now. Good work.
Author's Response: That's the problem of being a seer you got to take the good with the bad. and if the bad is seeing death all the time you'd end up shutting yourself off as well. thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
01/17/06 - 07:58AM |
2: 101: Insurance - act 2 |
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I just had another thought. Maybe she's planning to kill herself to end the pain of her existence. Knowing the future is a terrible curse in most mythologies.
Author's Response: she's not planning that. like i said you'll find out more about her next chapter |
| twinblade |
01/17/06 - 07:56AM |
2: 101: Insurance - act 2 |
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Is she predicting deaths or causing them, Hmmm. I'm waiting to read more...as always.
Author's Response: you'll find out more about Heidi's condition and powers next chapter. thanks fro reviewing |
| always angel |
01/15/06 - 11:18PM |
2: 101: Insurance - act 2 |
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Great chapter. Poor Rebecca. I hope Willow can help her. Gotta ask, did Angel die too? And did I just read that Heidi is evil?
Author's Response: Angel's not dead he's just not in Raleighfield that's why no mention. they still have to find willow first before they can get her help. i hope you checked out Penny's story in "The Night-Hawk" fic. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/15/06 - 11:10PM |
2: 101: Insurance - act 2 |
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Poor Rebecca. She can't get a break. And Willow can't help her, virus (seems W/R/H have said that before) I hope Heidi's not evil. See doesn't seem that way, to me. Just like she has something bigger, then her. Good work.
Author's Response: The Trinity had to take one last pot shot at her before they're gone. Heidi isn't evil I'll be explaining her condition later on. thanks for reviewing |
| Peaches Girl |
01/15/06 - 10:48PM |
2: 101: Insurance - act 2 |
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Man, that girl Heidi is kind of creepy. I hope someone can help Rebecca, she has been through so much W.R.&H always messing with her even after they are dead. Gees evil guys suck.
Author's Response: Heidi might be evil but she is incredibly useful. i agree evil does suck but that's what Wolfram and Heart does best. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/14/06 - 11:36PM |
1: 101: Insurance - act 1 |
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So, they all died, when she died? Guess that means, nighthawk won't get a spinoff, after all. Unless it's like weekend, at Bernies, or something. (Hu, weekend, at Nighthawks.).
Author's Response: Don't worry I'll explain what happened to Nighthawk all I'll reveal is that she's not dead. aside from that I'll be slowly revealing what happened at the demon fight throughout the fic. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/14/06 - 10:50PM |
1: 101: Insurance - act 1 |
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Oh great start! I really should be studying instead of reading but I'm hooked. I just know I'm going to love this! Wish you didn't kill Buffy though.
Author's Response: Sorry had to. it was the only way to revert the slayer line back. i'm going to try and make the quality of the series live up to the trilogy also watch out for the second H.O.E. based series i'm going to start it soon. thanks for reviewing |
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