Reviews for Hell on Earth 4: Signum - Series 1
| axel |
02/11/06 - 11:50AM |
11: 103: The Seal – Act 3 |
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Ok Before this is over, please kill Axel! He's an idot! I mean he had to know that was a trick! Oh, and at the end (Yeah, you go ahead, and kill demons, cause I know I need to support you, know that I ruined everything!)And Willow, (I know I forgot something, Could it be NIGHTHAWK!) Good work!
Author's Response: Are you sure you want me to kill Axel or is it Alex you want dead 'case last time i did stuff to Axel i ended up getting my ass whopped at fight night (joking). like Darrel said he could have been lying or it could have been the truth. He knew that Rebecca was Alex's weakness and put the emotional boot in. doesn't matter how much it looked like deception if there was the slightest chance of saving Rebecca he would have taken it. as for Willow she was extremely distracted with the virus. Plus if she went charging in now it would have ruined a chapter that is going to happen later on in the series, oh, and i can't kill Alex he has a vital roll in series 2. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
02/09/06 - 11:16PM |
10: 103: The Seal – Act 2 |
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and at that moment Rebecca,Angel and willow show up to kick some serrious ass right? i mean Belle can't die so soon.
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not you don't know what happened to Nolan. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/09/06 - 11:08PM |
10: 103: The Seal – Act 2 |
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| Oh, and I meant to say, come on, Alex, not Axel, sorry. |
| axel |
02/09/06 - 10:20PM |
10: 103: The Seal – Act 2 |
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Come on, Axel. You know there not on the level. But love, makes you crazy, doesn't it. And hopfuly The new slayer, won't die, so soon, but it doesn't look good. Great Chapter. By the way. Check the Arean, It's MATCH TIME!
Author's Response: Yep love makes you crazy. especially when a law-firm is trying to kill your wife. i saw that match time had started and i cant wait to get my butt whopped by you! (wait . . . i think i said that wrong) |
| always angel |
02/08/06 - 09:16PM |
9: 103: The Seal – Act 1 |
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Good, Willow's there. Hopefully she can help Rebeeca.
Author's Response: Help Rebecca but get Penny captured. she's going to try her best to save the Divine One but Alore & Struts, like Wolfram and Hart, never leave anything to chance. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/08/06 - 08:39PM |
9: 103: The Seal – Act 1 |
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Damn Wolfram, and Hart! At least Willow's finnaly there (though If they found her, this fast, she probably can't help. I know you, so well.)
Author's Response: Maybe, Maybe not 'Course her being there got Penny captured by the council and there might be an issue with the Amarra Vamp attack that's about to happen. I'd be more worried that Alore & Struts almost have their hands of the first piece of the Signum as well as messing with Alex's head. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
02/07/06 - 11:27PM |
8: 102: Black Widow – Act 4 |
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Alex doesnt know about the virus does he?
Author's Response: Not yet but he will soon. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
02/05/06 - 07:09PM |
8: 102: Black Widow – Act 4 |
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Oh no! There going after Penny! Are they going to kill Waylen too?
Author's Response: No Waylans fine but The Wanderer might be in trouble. Rodgers priority is gathering the slayers by any means and if he can't get what he wants then nobody can. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/30/06 - 12:51PM |
7: 102: Black Widow – Act 3 |
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After all these years the council is still made up of a bunch of ass holes that only think of theirselves.
Author's Response: Yep that's the council. especially since they were slayerless for two years it made them desperate. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/30/06 - 12:33PM |
6: 102: Black Widow – Act 2 |
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I feel bad for Heidi. Highschool can be pure hell.
Author's Response: yeah especially when your an outcast. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/30/06 - 12:33PM |
6: 102: Black Widow – Act 2 |
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| I feel bad for Heidi. Highschool can be pure hell. |
| axel |
01/29/06 - 12:38PM |
7: 102: Black Widow – Act 3 |
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So there's one slayer, and the Coucil is a bunch of evil jerks. (I feel nostalgic) Good work!
Author's Response: One slayer known to them and the council is a bunch of jerks but not actually evil. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/25/06 - 09:18PM |
6: 102: Black Widow – Act 2 |
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Poor Heidi. She has it bad. Maybe She'll find a werewof, or something. And beccy has it bad to. Now that Willow, isn't coming. (You'd think she've left a way, for beccy to find her, though. She must be slpining, in her old age) Good work.
Author's Response: You'll find out why Rebecca can't contact Willow further down the track. as for Heidi she does have it tough not being confident in high school can be tough. Thanks for reviewing |
| Peaches Girl |
01/23/06 - 10:15PM |
5: 102: Black Widow – Act 1 |
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Demon magnet, thats very Xandery, but I love it. Great chapter. Wonder if Beck will find a way to got to Willow. Maybe the creepy seer girl can do it. Well maybe she's not so creepy after all, I'm starting to like her.
Author's Response: I'm sure there will be a way Beck will find Willow. Nolan is got actually going to be a demon magnet it's just the first demon. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/22/06 - 11:18PM |
5: 102: Black Widow – Act 1 |
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Ok the first part of the chapter with the giant spider creeped me out. Besides that though, I really like this chapter. And Nolan really reminds me of Xander.
Author's Response: that's the idea of Nolan's character but i didn't want to make him too Xandery. the spider had to be creepy to be a threat. thanks for reviewing |
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