Reviews for Hell on Earth 4: Signum - Series 1
| axel |
08/12/06 - 02:39PM |
31: 108: Flashback – Act 4 |
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| Ah oh! They can't die yet! I can't say why, but you know what I mean. |
| always angel |
06/19/06 - 10:21PM |
30: 108: Flashback – Act 3 |
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yay Dawn, go save your daughter!
Author's Response: yes it's dawn to the rescue. thanks for reviewing |
| redmoon |
06/16/06 - 12:21PM |
1: 101: Insurance - act 1 |
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Wow. I know this has been up for a while, but the Arenas introduced me to Heidi and now I want more. I'd noramally say "keep it up" or "update soon" or something, but you're a dozen episodes ahead. I'll try and catch up. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot red. the 'Hell on Earth' saga has been a labor of love for me and all though it's my least reviewed it's also my favorite. thanks for reviewing |
| Raven |
06/15/06 - 11:47PM |
29: 108: Flashback – Act 2 |
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So they'll die, if Dawn doesn't stop it. THEIR DOOMED! Like it, keep it up.
Author's Response: Exactly. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
06/14/06 - 12:51AM |
29: 108: Flashback – Act 2 |
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Another great chapter. I'm really loving this. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Will do. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
06/13/06 - 10:49PM |
28: 108: Flashback – Act 1 |
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Holy freakin' shit that was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. like i said to Axel it's not often you get to kill all your lead character as part of the story so when they opportunity do it right i say. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
06/13/06 - 06:08PM |
28: 108: Flashback – Act 1 |
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You son of a bitch! That was mean! Ok, all kidding aside good work. I'm wondering where your going with this.
Author's Response: Yeah i know but it's not very often you get a chapter where you can kill all of your primary leads in one shot. the only clue I'm giving about this episode is that this is gonna be set in the Buffy series time-line. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
06/12/06 - 12:19AM |
27: 107: Id – Act 4 |
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Alex, you male slut! And your wife is dying, shame shame. I knew there was a reason I wanted him to die. Yes, I know I'm supposed to be understanding, but seeiong as my dad left us, for another woman, KILL HIM! Oh, and Heidi leanr about her power. I have a queston can she make all those things happen, or is it all in people's heads? Anyway good work.
Author's Response: Yes she can make all the things happen. the way i pictured Psionic abilities is that it's the peak of psychic power. the reason Id could do all that is Heidi's power was controlled by her subconscious. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
06/11/06 - 11:41PM |
27: 107: Id – Act 4 |
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Its about time Nolan noticed Heidi. And Alex is a cheating bastard!
Author's Response: Yeah Nolan is slow like that and with what she's been through i thought it was time for her to have something good for a change. as for Alex, like i said to Axel, Alex has a lesson to learn which he's going to learn the hard way. |
| always angel |
06/05/06 - 12:52AM |
26: 107: Id – Act 3 |
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Aww man, why'd you leave it there? Update soon.
Author's Response: because if i explained everything i wouldn't have a cliff hanger. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
06/05/06 - 12:29AM |
26: 107: Id – Act 3 |
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Yeah, I remember when I made up a crazy ghost woman, that tried to kill me. It gets better Heidi. Good work.
Author's Response: What makes you think it's a ghost? trust me everything will become clear next chapter. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
06/03/06 - 09:33PM |
25: 107: Id – Act 2 |
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Good work, and I think I'm seeing what Id is. One thing (And this may have been a computer thing) But the story start to repete itself half way though. What's up?
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out it was a computer thing i only wanted to paste one part and, accidentally pasted the whole thing it's been fixed now if you want to read. as for Id you'll find out exactly who Id is next chapter. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
06/03/06 - 12:49AM |
25: 107: Id – Act 2 |
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Heidi's screwed....
Author's Response: Maybe but there might be more to Id then it seems. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
05/31/06 - 11:29PM |
24: 107: Id – Act 1 |
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Oh, and I mean kill yourself on the show, not real life. (As far as I know. If your thinking about that, don't. There are plenty of things to live for. Like uh, well uh, hats.)
Author's Response: ha ha i knew what you meant. and the reason i killed myself on the show was that nobody expected me to do it which made for a cool twist i thought. |
| axel |
05/31/06 - 11:27PM |
24: 107: Id – Act 1 |
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| Well, I haven't responed because I wanted to let both Arena's rest a wile. I mean they've only been up for a couple of weeks, and there almost over. So I didn't want to burn people out yet. Don't worry though I'm thinking about what comes next. I was surprised you wanted to kill yourself though. I treid to give you an out, but oh well. |
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