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Reviews for Lying Eyes




SpiffySpuffy8723 01/21/06 - 12:42PM 7: Holding On Signed
You had me crying! With Willow, and the fleeting moment were Buffy (and I) thought that Dawn wouldn't forgive her, it was just so sad! Characters are developing great. I like how you fit Dawn into the cast so easily, even though she didn't come until later in the series. Keep up the great work!

Psyche2 01/11/06 - 07:04PM 7: Holding On Signed
This story is fantastic. Its real and to make a story realistic is a awesome trait. I can't wait for more, update soon!

slayed008 01/11/06 - 09:46AM 7: Holding On Signed
Absolutely great! Very well written, but you know I could really care less for Dawn. I'm wondering though why you're including her in this story considering she was not part of the show at that time? Either way all the characters are written fantastically. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: All my stories pretty much are written as they would have been remembered by the Scoobies, with Dawn in them...cause I *do* like Dawn!! :) lol...thanx for the positive feedback

bob_obo 01/11/06 - 05:57AM 7: Holding On Signed
This story - much like your previous ones, is extremely well written and has an impressive grasp of the personailities of the chartacters you are writing. Unlike previous stories - specifically Saving Grace, which I found just slightly meandering and predictable (just a little), this story seems perfectly paced so far and far more intriguing. What's truely stunning is the speed with which each chapter is updated. I can write ~3000 words a day. I'm not at all sure I could write 300 words that are half as articulate and well considered though. Basically - great work! Keep it up, as I want to know what happens...
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