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Peaches Girl 01/04/06 - 09:45PM 1: Eternal Love Signed
All I can say is is made me teary eyed. Very well written, I could picture it all in my mind and awe, so sweet. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I’m glad you liked it.

punk 01/04/06 - 08:34PM 1: Eternal Love Signed
Excellent Work! I like how you worked to get into the character's emotions - and the part where Buffy and Angel kiss is really electric. Very well written section!! My only little piece of constructive criticism is that there wasn't any description when Buffy see's Angel enter. That moment is so powerful - it would have been nice to get a sense of it through your writing, which is wonderfully rich in its descriptions. Other than that I loved it. Very well done!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your wonderful review! I really appreciate reader responses, as it helps improve my writing. Thanks again!






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