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Reviews for another answer to Slayerfest's challenge




lieselot 02/28/06 - 01:32PM 1: the Air Force Signed
Good job, I really liked it, the air force, cool! I understand Dawn's point tough, but I'd be okay with it after a while, it's not Dawn's choice to make, after all, but I'd be worried too. Anyways, short fic, but a good one!

Author's Response: Hey thanks

axel 01/18/06 - 04:17PM 1: the Air Force Signed
Good work. And good luck, in the air force. (If your really going.)

Author's Response: Thanks gotta few years before that that though but thanks

slayerfest 01/02/06 - 02:32AM 1: the Air Force Signed
All right. I see some things shining through. You seem to have taken your life and someone's disapproval of your career choice (very brave, btw. All the power). The story itself strikes me as just a bit of a blurb. It's an insight to Dawnsville rather than an entire story; it's a... glimpse, there we are. Which is good. It suits it, I think. The dialogue is good, the characters are good [especially yourself ;)] and you have strong, compelling writing. Thanks so much for contributing!

littlewiccan 12/30/05 - 01:41PM 1: the Air Force Signed
I went and read the challange so now I know what its all about. I thought it was a nice way to put you into the Buffyverse and your character/you was potrayed very realistically and well. The interaction was good as well. The only fault I can find is that it didn't really have a plot or not one that I understood. I think if you fit yourself into a more expanded story it would be better but other then that it was great.
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