Reviews for To Keep Safe
| harlequin |
08/06/06 - 01:37AM |
17: Faith-ful Ways |
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i really loved this chapter, with all the flashbacks on faith. and the ending is absolutely priceless.
Author's Response: Thanks. I was wondering how many people actually like this story. I'm happy you thought that ending scene was priceless, that kind of thing is like a stereotype that works. :-) Thank You. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:44PM |
23: Not The End of Days [Season Finale] |
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I loved the season. The ending bit with Connor leaving to find something was heartbreaking. It kind of reminded me of Oz leaving in Buffy season 4. I really like Connor and Emma, so I hope he comes back. Great story!
Author's Response: I wanted to cliff-hang that baby! :-P To find out what happens, you'll just have to read next season. Thank you for all the reviews, gives me a good feeling of hope to hear good things about my writing. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:38PM |
22: Turned Into a Threat |
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Great ending. What a cliffhanger. I loved seeing Groo as again, too, by the way.
Author's Response: I wanted to bring back Groo. I just don't think he had a very good ending. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:36PM |
21: Can't be Green, Can't be Lorne |
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The Lorne showcase episode was great. I love that character, so it's great to see him. The end segment at the house was hysterical.
Author's Response: I didn't know that was hysterical, cool. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:34PM |
20: The Descendants |
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Kick ass fight- alright! I love the drama, but the action sequences are always welcome. The way your plots develop and your fight scenes unfold really have me hooked on this story.
Author's Response: I'm all smiles at the moment. Thank You. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:32PM |
19: Deep Sleep |
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Ouch. It's got to suck to bite your own daughter- no pun ntended. Great chapter. It was a nice showcase of youe Spike-writig skills.
Author's Response: It hurts- no pun intended. I like writing Spike. Thank you. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:30PM |
18: Try Again |
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I think it's cool how you have these character-centric chapters in the over-arching story. It's the same thing the shows did. And you brought back the caveman argument! Brilliant. I love it!
Author's Response: Cool, "character-centric". I'm glad I can still make it like the show. Yay. Thanks. |
| filmtheory |
03/27/06 - 01:28PM |
17: Faith-ful Ways |
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Great chapter. I love how you broke off and gave us a Faith story- details of the past in Boston and centering on her in the present. Of course, it helps that she's one of my favorite characters.
Author's Response: Thank You. Often I do not remember little details about a character from the shows so I have to either do internet searchs or something else and I'm glad it was good for you. |
| filmtheory |
03/14/06 - 12:59AM |
16: Slayer with a Knot to Tie |
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Awesome chapter. The opening action sequence is great. (The mother's going to blow). I cna't believe Buffy married that guy. Still, that's one way to get her out of the story and make this about Angel and co. I loved Spike smacking Emma in the back of the head. As I said, great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You. I never much cared for Alex anyway but I think people should move on and stuff like that. |
| filmtheory |
02/21/06 - 01:03PM |
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Wow. Thanks for thanking me for my reviews. You're welcome. My pleasure. As for the chapter . . . married? And who's this Alex guy? Well, at least she didn't wind up with Spike.
Author's Response: In The Episode 'My Fake' I introduced Alex. That's where he's from, and I'm remembering mentioning that Buffy had a fiancé throughout, maybe the last season and little bits before. But mainly he's just from 'My Fake.'
Author's Response: I kind of felt bad about that episode, I wish I did better, I know, I'll rewrite it. Yes, thank you for you're inspiration, I'm going to rewrite it. THANKS!!!!!!!!!!:-P |
| filmtheory |
02/21/06 - 01:00PM |
15: Wacky Family |
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I forgot to mention in my last chapter how excited I was that Dru was back. I like the flashback. I always love those. And yes, that is a pretty wacky family.
Author's Response: Flash backs just have an exciting way about them. |
| filmtheory |
02/21/06 - 12:59PM |
14: Dear To You |
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So that's what a human with no soul acts like. Yikes. I love that this was all a trial, or perhaps part of one. I can understand how Connor's past actions could be considered the sort of things that would put his soul in question and make TPTB want to have him "earn" it back. Great chapter. Action packed and emotionally charged.
Author's Response: Thank You for such words. I wanted him to earn it back, and there be all kinds of emotion. |
| filmtheory |
02/07/06 - 06:50PM |
13: Your Fault |
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Okay, I just read your bio for the first time and realized you’re only 15 years old. I’m not really pissed off and jealous. :P Mary is definitely cool and I love the Connor/ Angel interaction yet again. The scene with the punching bag was great. There was smart ass repartee but also Angel trying to make his son feel better about himself. Then, of course, you give us the Descendants-. I hope the change isn’t permanent, but who knows. Great twist.
Author's Response: I like a good twist, of course I just randomly throw the twists in, whatever pops up in my head that I can play with. [:-P] Smart ass repartee, cool words for it. And the change, just wait and see......;-P |
| filmtheory |
02/07/06 - 06:35PM |
12: Stress |
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I love the gimmick of having the story unfold as Wes talks to a shrink. The events were funny, too. Connor fighting the vamp in the lobby (although a killer headbutt seems odd), Spike stealing Angel’s blood and wallet and Emma leaving her boots about. Then, of course, Wes moves out and starts to move no with a Mormon girl. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, the killer headbutt seems quite odd, but it's one of those things you learn after the first time not to do again. Unless you're not going for the strength to kill. Thank you for your words. |
| filmtheory |
02/07/06 - 06:22PM |
11: Seek Part II |
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Another very long but very good chapter. I like the dog whistle line. And of course, new wheels are always appreciated. The Connor/ Angel interaction in this was pretty funny. I really like seeing them get a long *a little* better than they used to.
Author's Response: Sorry I type a long story, but when I have a story to tell, I tell it with [I guess you could say,] passion. I'm glad you thought the interaction was funny, I was going for a little bit of the funny stuff between Conner and Angel. I think dog whistles are funny. And I think Angel needs some new wheels, just Angel needs wheels. :-P |
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