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TammyDevil666 12/27/05 - 03:48PM 1: 1 Signed
Okay, I'm not trying to be mean, but I think you need to work more on these stories. Everything is too rushed and it's a bit out of character. I also think it might help if you had someone read them over first to help with the errors that I've been noticing. Just some suggestions, I think these have a lot of potential if more was done with them.

littlewiccan 12/27/05 - 02:34PM 1: 1 Signed
It was good and I liked but I thought everything happened a little too quick. I also wasn't sure if Willow would really act that way but other then that it was good.
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