Reviews for Expecting 2
| harlequin |
08/03/06 - 10:32PM |
10: Seeing Double |
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| this is filled with so many twists and turns, god i love this. |
| Sinister |
01/03/06 - 07:24PM |
12: Aftermath |
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| Awww...very nice stuff. I loved it. I don't usually like sequales better but I gotta say this one was quite possably even better then the first. I can't wait to see what's in store for the third. Great job! |
| Sinister |
01/03/06 - 10:35AM |
11: Wiccan See, Wiccan Do |
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| Nice! Great fight scene. I knew Maple would kick her ass. Awesome job! |
| axel |
01/02/06 - 08:56PM |
11: Wiccan See, Wiccan Do |
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Good work. But is that the end? or is more coming.
Author's Response: One, maybe two more chapters....but I do have some ideas about Expecting 3. |
| axel |
01/01/06 - 04:51PM |
10: Seeing Double |
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| Is it wrong that I like Amy? I know she's an evil bitch, and I'm supossed to hate her, but I have a thing for evil bitches. Hey, Amy was a pretty good person, before she was turned into a rat. And Willow was on her way to beong evil, when she turned her back. What if some of Willow's evil infected her, and that's why she went bad? Sound's like an Idea, for a stroy? Anyway good job. |
| Sinister |
12/31/05 - 11:53PM |
10: Seeing Double |
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Hahaha! Amy...what a bitch. She still can't get over the fact that Willow is a better witch then her. Nice work!
Author's Response: Yeah, Amy has always been the Anti-Willow...but her reasons are much worse. |
| Sinister |
12/31/05 - 06:22PM |
9: Talsiment |
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| Nice! I'm so glad that Willow is all better now. I knew it couldn't have really been her and I'm so glad that the Kennedy figure was just a demon. Nice job and I can't wait to see what happens with Maple's look alike. |
| Sinister |
12/30/05 - 09:18AM |
8: Flesh |
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| Sorry I messed up the serprise :-( Great job though I can't wait to see whats going to happen with Willow. I hope it's not Kennedy's real spirit because I really like Kennedy. I also can't wait to see who this Maple look alike is...very interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| axel |
12/30/05 - 01:02AM |
8: Flesh |
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| See I thought the thing with Willow's breast, and the hand print was Willow making it happen. Like when she made herself inviseble. ANyway good work. |
| Sinister |
12/29/05 - 06:50PM |
7: Facing Reality |
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Damn Willow's got a mouth on her lol. Something tells me this isn't the whole story though. If it was all in Willow's head then why would Gia have seen the hand print on her mom's boob. Something isn't right here and I'm just dying to find out what it is. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: DAMN! i ws hoping nobody caught that, it was my big surprise for latter on. :) |
| axel |
12/29/05 - 02:17AM |
7: Facing Reality |
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| Good work. And hopfuly Willow will get the help she needs. But Mapel's still needs her ass kicked. By the way. I like that you put Xander, and Dawn together. I did that in my story Unmask (yes it's a cheap plug, what of it?) And I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks it's a good Idea. Keep it up. |
| always angel |
12/29/05 - 12:42AM |
7: Facing Reality |
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| This chapter was really sad. Poor Willow. |
| always angel |
12/29/05 - 12:22AM |
6: One Weird Night |
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| This story is great! I love what you're doing with it. I can't wait to see what the hell is up with Willow and who the Maple double is. And I like the Dawn/Xander, they would be cute together. |
| Sinister |
12/28/05 - 06:22PM |
6: One Weird Night |
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Wow! Lots of interesting stuff going on in this chapter. The Xander/Dawn thing is a little weird. I guess because I still picture her as 16 and him as 22 and those ages together are just weird but I guess that this age it wouldn't be as weird...but still...idk lol. The Willow thing is also weird I hope they find out whats wrong with her soon. I'm also excited to see what's going on with Maple look alike. Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Well...just remember that this set 16 or 17 years in the future, so Dawn isn't jail bait anymore. As for the rest....keep ready. |
| Sinister |
12/28/05 - 09:15AM |
5: There's Something About Willow |
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| Great job! I can't believe Willow would try and kill herself but then again...she had been through a lot. It was pretty selfish of Maple to just leave like that though. That couldn't have made things any better. Well I hope Buffy and the others can find some way to help Wil. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
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