Reviews for The Second Generation
| spikes girl |
01/04/06 - 11:21PM |
8: Comforting |
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hey, not way was that too sappy, it was so perfectly sweet! The Giles and Dawn convo was really beautiful, and i'm so glad Faith has someone who will be there for her as well! One of your best chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. And here I was worried about it being one of my worst chapters lol. I'm glad your enjoying the story and I hope you continue to read it. Thanks again for the review. |
| Wonkabar |
01/04/06 - 11:16PM |
8: Comforting |
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That wasn't sappy, what was sweet. I love it, espically when Dawn told Giles about him being a father figure. I'm loving this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really liked the Dawn and Giles part too. I just always felt like he was a father to them both and I thought it was time he finally got to hear that strait from the hourses mouth. Thanks again for the review, I really apresiate it. |
| Peaches Girl |
01/04/06 - 09:29PM |
8: Comforting |
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Awe, that was so sweet and sappy and I loved every minute of it. I hope they all decided to stay together. LA is got to be a fun town for two slayers to play around in. Plus, I think that Spike may pay a visit soon, maybe huh, maybe?Great chapter, loved it. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you liked it. I just had to throw in all the sappyness because I just love it when characters are all sweet and stuff lol. And don't worry...we haven't seen the last of Spike. Thanks again for the review. |
| axel |
01/03/06 - 10:39PM |
7: LA |
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Poor girls' but at least they'll aways have wine. (Some people get that joke, and some will get it next weekl ) Good work.
Author's Response: lol...yea I don't get it...hopefully next week. Thanks for the review! |
| Wonkabar |
01/03/06 - 08:37PM |
7: LA |
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This is so great. You got Lorne perfect...wait, was he the person on the phone with Angel?
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you think I did a good job with Lorne. I just got done watching the 4th and 5th season's of Angel that I got for christmas so thats probably why I've got him down so well. And Angel was actually on the phone with Faith before. I didn't want to reveal that she was the 8th mother until the next chapter so I left the call a mistary. As always thanks so much for taking the time to review it means a lot. |
| Psyche2 |
01/03/06 - 07:48PM |
7: LA |
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This is really great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update really soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad your enjoying it. I'll try and update as soon as I can. Thanks again for all your wonderful reviews. |
| Wonkabar |
01/03/06 - 05:41PM |
6: Working Together |
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Keep going with this. I hope Angel knows what he is getting himself into.
Author's Response: Yea...with the back grounds all of these people have...it could get interesting. Thanks as always for reviewing. |
| axel |
01/03/06 - 04:06PM |
6: Working Together |
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Spikes on a mission, hu? Good work. Now if they can keep from killing each other.
Author's Response: Yeah I knew I wanted to get Spike a soul before too long and I wasn't really sure when or how I was going to do it. Then at the end of this chapter it just came to me. He has a nice conversation with Buffy, thinks things are going well, then finds out shes going to skip off to LA with Angel and ignore the fact that he even excists. I figured it was a perfect time for him to get that soul of his so that he can at least try to compete with Angel. Anyway thanks for the review. I'm glad your enjoying the story. |
| Psyche2 |
01/03/06 - 12:59PM |
6: Working Together |
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Ooh, this is getting really good. I can't wait to read the rest. I think them going to L.A. is a great idea. I think this is going to be funny...eight pregnant girls and Angel, Giles, Wesley, Gunn and Xander....lol.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your liking it. I'm really excited about writing the next couple chapters. I have some ideas that I can't wait to explore. Thanks again for the kind review. |
| axel |
01/02/06 - 07:39PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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yeah sorry I deleted fallen(it was an actident) But I'm rewritng it. and the fisrt chapetr is back up(it's not in for part episodes this time, just one chapter, per episode) it will be awile before it's back to new episodes, because I have to rewrite from scratch. Sorry for that. And I hope you'll still read, when it's back.
Author's Response: Oh man that really sux. I was hoping that you didn't actually delete it. Can't wait till there's more of it out. |
| Peaches Girl |
01/01/06 - 11:20PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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Yes, I knew it was Faith. Great chapter. I cant wait to see how you bring them all together. How will Angel react to Buffy being around. Update soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the addition of Faith. I just couldn't do this story without her. She's a great character. Thanks again for the review. |
| axel |
01/01/06 - 02:20PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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Great chapeter. And Faith's here, that's always good. What kind of mother would she be (And how would her upbringing efect her feelings about being a mom. Would she worrie about become like her parents?) ANyway keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just had to include Faith. I think their all going to be different mothers and I'll def explore everything you said about her being a mother and about her own upbringing. I don't want to give anything away so you'll just have to wait and see what kind of mother Faith will be. Thanks again for the review.
Author's Response: OH NO!!! YOU DELETED THE FAITH STORY!? I just went to see if you updated it and it was gone. That was such a good story :-( |
| Psyche2 |
12/31/05 - 08:41PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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Yay...this is really getting good! Can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad your liking it. I should hopefully be updating soon. I'm currently working on three stories at the same time which I normally don't like to do so it's hard to get them all updated but this is the one I've been having the most idea's for lately so it's probably the one I'll be updating the quickest. Anyway thanks again for the kind review. |
| Wonkabar |
12/31/05 - 08:27PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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Good work! I can't wait to see what you have in story for Faith.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping that people would like the addition of Faith. I planned for her to be in it the whole time but I wanted to drag it out a bit because I love to throw in surprises and stuff. Anyway thanks for the review. |
| axel |
12/26/05 - 12:47AM |
4: Now What? |
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Great Chapter. I think this is a great Idea. I give Wonka credit for coming up withit, but your doing great with the Idea. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review! Your words mean a lot. Wonka's fic is great and I'm glad I'm doing a good job with mine as well. Thanks again. |
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