Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)
| Quortoth |
02/09/06 - 09:32AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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:-P Conner has games, funny. I like that Cordelia is like a main moral person, Angel is sinking into the darkness, Cordelia can pull him out. Or at least she has a good point, and tries hard. I like that she wants Conner to get his memories back.
Author's Response: Cordy wanting to restore the Connor she knew is just another level of conflict. Eve and the Senior Partners want what's evil. Angel wants what's easy. Cordelia is the only one who wants what's right while also armed with the informaiton about what's happening. Thanks again for the review! |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
01/30/06 - 01:35PM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Wow! That was great. The energy piece with Connor was a really creative idea. Love it! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks. The energy is just something I just thought of a couple years ago actually. I really wanted to work it into a story and that;s what kind of inspired me to write this. Thanks for reading. |
| Violet SS |
12/24/05 - 12:59AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Very cool reveal. I had a totally different idea in my head about the boy, but you've carefully seeded the clues throughout the story. Great payoff!
Author's Response: Yeah, I left some little clues about the boy in the white room. I was a little afraid I was overdoing it. I’m glad you consider it a great playoff and not a weak plot twist. Thanks again for all your reviews, advice, and encouragement. |
| dutchgirl |
12/16/05 - 08:09AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Wow, that was one hell of a fast update, great chapters!! I like that you bring back the black energy from Quar’Toth, I had aspected that they would have brought that subject back in season 4 after seeing it in season 3 but it didn't. It defenitly can be a interesting for the story-line!! Also a smart idea to explain why cordy hasn't really talked much with the other characters (busy with work) makes it a more flowing story!!
Hope you update soon again ^^!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The next update will probably be a while coming. I thought the black energy from Quar'Toth was a great element, too. The diconnect between people is often the cause of major problems. If people would communicate more, there'd be so much less misery in the world. I'm kind of going for that point with this story, I suppose. Thanks so much for reading it and reviewing it. |
| axel |
12/16/05 - 03:26AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Hu, intresting ending. And I'm glad Cordies back (I never really thought she was that important to the show, untill she was gone. And when she came back, everything clicked again. So they killed her, Smart.) By the way, I didn't mean to make you chance your stoy, I was just giving you a hard time. Sorry.
Author's Response: Don't worry about being sorry on the story changing. You weren't the only one who mentioned that element and I didn't wantpeople getting hung up on it. I was actually going for a point with the scene and didn't want that lost due to a gut reaction. |
| Vamp19762000 |
12/14/05 - 02:03AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Good ending. Please write more very soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. More is on the way. |
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