Reviews for Love, Lies, and Apple Pie
| Peaches Girl |
04/19/06 - 09:08PM |
12: Babies, Weddings, and Happy Endings |
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Awe, it all worked out in the end. I love your story, I thought it was so cute with a touch of angst. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks...I was getting worried it was becoming a bit too angsty lol. |
| Fighter78 |
02/21/06 - 09:03PM |
10: Reflections, Choices, and Proposals |
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Hey good chapter and I'm glad that she really doesn't want an abortion, Good work. Keep it up
Author's Response: I didn't think it was in Fred's character to want one. Thanks and I will. |
| Peaches Girl |
02/21/06 - 08:34PM |
10: Reflections, Choices, and Proposals |
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Great chapter. I love that Darla feels for Fred. Oh, and the ew was for the glass cutting of Dawn's in the last chapter. And as always that is a good think I love your story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks and okay got it, it was a good ew. lol Thanks and I will. |
| Fighter78 |
02/19/06 - 10:54PM |
9: Plans, Confessions, and Forgiveness |
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I hope everything works out for Connor and Fred and if you want another reader's opinion have her put the child up for adoption or keep the child and also poor Dawn. She is really going through a lot. Well good chapter and update soon
Author's Response: Thanks and I wish I had gotten this before I outlined the entire rest of the story. I actually had another idea of what would happen to the baby but maybe I'll use one of yours instead. Thanks for commenting. |
| Peaches Girl |
02/19/06 - 01:36PM |
9: Plans, Confessions, and Forgiveness |
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Ew, Dawn has serious issues. Great chapter. Wonder how the talk between Fred and Connors parents will go.
Author's Response: Thanks and was that a good ew or a bad one?? |
| Peaches Girl |
02/17/06 - 10:46PM |
8: Tacos, Corvets, and Past Events |
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Great update. I love the frozen taco part, so cute. Dawn should forgive Connor, poor Connor.
Author's Response: Thanks and don't worry she'll forgive him. Glad you liked the bit about the tacos it just seemed to fit. |
| Fighter78 |
02/16/06 - 04:07PM |
8: Tacos, Corvets, and Past Events |
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Very awsome story. Loving it. Update soon. =)
Author's Response: Thanks and will do. |
| Peaches Girl |
02/14/06 - 10:02PM |
7: Babies, Maybes, and Car Rides |
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Wow, if I were Dawn I dont think I could ride with Fred after all that. Has to be uncomfortable. Great chapter, this is a great story. Update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks and yeah its gonna be a little uncomftorble but she needs a ride home. |
| michebabyblue |
01/26/06 - 03:09PM |
1: Goodbyes, Hellos, and Packing Woes |
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That was sad, liked it though.
Author's Response: Yeah I know it was sad but I'm happy you liked it. |
| michebabyblue |
01/25/06 - 10:10PM |
4: Doubts, Firsts, and 3 Little Words |
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kool that was sweet but is it going to last. inquiring minds want to know
Author's Response: lol well the inquiring mind will have to wait a litle bit I suppose but I'll try to update soon. Thanks. : ) |
| Wonkabar |
01/25/06 - 08:41PM |
4: Doubts, Firsts, and 3 Little Words |
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Ahhh....that was sweet. Very well done. update please.
Author's Response: Sure thing. Thanks for the review. |
| frenchtoast101 |
01/24/06 - 07:51PM |
3: Recollections, Preparations, and Salutations |
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“I kinda have to agree with Tibby on this one. It looks like a turtle or maybe hybrid turtle-ash try thing,” Dawn said.
Author's Response: lol I'm guessing you liked that quote. Thanks for the review : ) |
| michebabyblue |
01/24/06 - 05:19PM |
3: Recollections, Preparations, and Salutations |
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Oh this is just cute, I love C/D pairring love the story.
Author's Response: Thanks : ) I love them together too |
| Peaches Girl |
01/09/06 - 10:42PM |
2: Cookies, Roomies, and Pillow Fights |
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That was so cute and sweet. I love a good Connor and Dawn story. I always thoght that they would be perfect for each other. Great update.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know its too bad they never met cuz they are perfect for eachother. Only they would be able to understand all the weird stuff that goes on i ntheir lives. lol : ) Thanks for the review. |
| Vamp_Grlz |
12/11/05 - 07:51PM |
1: Goodbyes, Hellos, and Packing Woes |
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This is a good start. I'd love to see the 'scandals' advertised in the summary. Lol. Update soon!
Author's Response: Yep, scandels or at least secrets and drama there will defiently be lol. I can't beleive I wrote the word scandles, they should just keep me away from a keyboard sometimes lol. |
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