Reviews for Oh Snap.
| MissEdith |
12/10/05 - 04:30PM |
3: Afternoon |
Signed |
I really like Blaise and the great dialogue. The transportation line, and the standing around like a dolt....
Author's Response: The dialogue is mostly made up. It was a silent dream, aside from things like the transportation line and "that's why I'm right" from Shady in chapter two. There are some others that I actually dreamed, but the dream itself was very serious; there was no banter about homicidal thoughts, for instance. So thank you, I'm glad it was effective. :) |
| Timan |
12/09/05 - 06:15AM |
3: Afternoon |
Signed |
I was going to go home, but my transportation is having a problem wherein it can’t transport anymore, thereby rendering its name and function completely useless. great line. i think most people take stating the obvious for granted but i think it can be a powerful tool. once again i congratulate your brain for fine work. If there's any other body part that you feel need recognition for it's work let me know (i specialise in knees). great keep it up i really want to know what happens next
Author's Response: Aha, that's one of the lines I actually dreamed. Most of the dialogue is fabricated, but people were always talking; I just couldn't hear them. I distinctly remember that line, though, so happy days. Thanks for the review. :) |
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