Reviews for Hell on Earth 3: Trinity
| axel |
12/17/05 - 11:31PM |
9: Chapter 8: Secrets and Lies |
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SEE all these year people said Metal record were the work of the devil, and it was Bunny book! (Sorry, that;s a hot button with me) Anyway Great chapet. Glory huh. I dout she have troible crossing that barrier that protects the sycthe. Not good. (By the way, who's body she sharing this time). I really want to kick Roy's ass! And Nighthawks Dad too! Keep it up.
Author's Response: beware the bunny book for it is evil! You'll find out how Glory survived and what Rebecca is going to have to do to protect the Scooby's and the monks. as for Roy and Michael they will get what's coming to them. Thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
12/17/05 - 09:30PM |
9: Chapter 8: Secrets and Lies |
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Rebecca working with the God that tried killing her mother and her aunt died to stop really is going to be interested. Please please update soon!
Author's Response: not only that they have to go after the Monks that trained Rebecca along with the fact that Rebecca's the key now and is capable of sending Glory back to her own dimension. this is going to be very interesting. thanks for reviewing |
| Peaches Girl |
12/17/05 - 12:23AM |
8: Chapter 7: Then and now |
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I think its great Beck gets a least 1 friend to talk to. It was sad though, I hope things dont get too bad. I cant wait to see who is coming to keep her busy though. Great chapter.
Author's Response: All I'm going to say is that it's going to be the last person you expect. things still have a little further to drop before before we see the light. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/17/05 - 12:00AM |
8: Chapter 7: Then and now |
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So Nighthawk is really rich? Now I wanna know what happened to her.
Author's Response: I'm going to be going through some of Nighthawk's and Alex's back story through the coming chapters. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/16/05 - 01:01AM |
7: Chapter 6: Recently chosen |
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Well so much for not having to deal with the "where have you been question" Keep it up.
Author's Response: it shouldn't be to bad. i mean how many of us have used the 'i was taken by monks and trained as a super-being to help fulfill a prophecy' line before. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/16/05 - 12:06AM |
7: Chapter 6: Recently chosen |
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uh-oh now her cover is blown. Update soon I can't wait to see Nighthawk's reaction.
Author's Response: Trust me it's going to be great. Very Nighthawk. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/15/05 - 03:04AM |
6: Chapter 5: The Los Angeles job |
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Hey Rebecca. When W,R,H, gets the REAL scythe from you. Remember I told you so. Great Chapeter. By the way I'm pretty sure Nighthawk could sue, that asshole. She has witnesses
Author's Response: She could but Roys blackmail weighs pretty heavily on her mind. as for Rebecca. W,R,H has to deal with The Divine One before they get anywhere near the genuine Slayer Scythe. |
| always angel |
12/14/05 - 11:46PM |
6: Chapter 5: The Los Angeles job |
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Roy is a freakin perverted bastard. Nighthawlk should kick his ass. Hell I want to kick his ass and he aint even real! Now that I'm done ranting..great chapter. I feel bad for Alex,it sucks loosing somebody you love. Update soon.
Author's Response: she should but nighthawk is stuck between the proverbial rock and the hard place. it's either her dignity or a roof over her head. also she doesn't want to get Shona Into trouble. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/13/05 - 02:54AM |
5: Chapter 4: Belly of the beast |
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Now why didn't they just destroy that thing? Now there going to get f*#ked all over again! Keep it up.
Author's Response: you don't actually think Rebecca would just hand over the scythe of the slayer willingly would you? thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
12/13/05 - 12:23AM |
5: Chapter 4: Belly of the beast |
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Thats not good. I have a feeling they're gonna pull a vampire Willow and get rid of all the slayers.
Author's Response: Maybe, Maybe not. that's the thing about Wolfram and Hart you never know what their full plan is until they reveal it. thanks for reviewing |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/12/05 - 11:15PM |
1: Prologue |
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Awesome awesome chappie. it justs keeps getting better and better. please update soon!!
Author's Response: will do. thanks for the review. |
| always angel |
12/12/05 - 01:42AM |
4: Chapter 3: Sit up and take notice |
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Is Whistler evil or is it just me? Poor Gunn I hope hes ok. And it figures Wolfram and Hart would be on to Rebecca. They always know everything that goes on.
Author's Response: Whister just has his own way of thinking it just so happens that it doesn't align with anybody else's. as for Wolfram and Hart. it would be naive to thing that they would be blind. as i said in chapter 2 they knew Rebecca's plan as soon as she stepped out of the monastery. thanks for reviewing |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/11/05 - 10:11PM |
4: Chapter 3: Sit up and take notice |
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i gotta say this is the first fic i have read by you and from the first chappie of this, i was completely blown away. i'm gonna try not to make this review very long, but the whole idea of the Divine One and the prophecies and everything included here is completely mind blowing. ancient prohecies and all that makes fics very very interesting and i couldn't help but be drawn to the summary. my eyes caught on reading it as soon as you posted this fic. Very very well written and its great to see both Buffy and her gang, Whistler, Angel and his gang, the new slayers, etc are involved in this. like i said, this fic is very well written, just be careful with some of the spelling errors. Because of how interesting this fic is, im gonna add this to my faves and im definitely, definitely looking forward to seeing an awesome update really soon. You're doing an amazing job on this. please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. it's good to hear that someone is enjoying it. this fic has a special place in my heart i really enjoy writing for the many different character involved in this world. It has taken two fics and 40 chapters to reach this point in the story and i assure you I'm going to take this trilogy out with a bang. as for the spelling, thanks for mentioning it, i have to get back into the habit of reading through it before i post. thanks for reviewing
Author's Response: if your interested in finding out more about the story take to time to read the first two chapters: The last slayer and Futures divided. this should clear up anything that you might not understand. |
| axel |
12/11/05 - 07:21PM |
4: Chapter 3: Sit up and take notice |
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I was begining to wonder, if Whistler, and the monks were telling the truth, or just wanted Becky to kill W,R,H's enemys. And with the end It look more likely. Good Work.
Author's Response: No there is more to it then simple revenge. you have to remember that this has been prophecised for centuries and the the senior partners have pretty much controlled this reality for a while. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/10/05 - 02:44AM |
3: Chapter 2: The Divine One |
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Great Chapet. So we're finnaly going to meet the partners face, to face, Hu?
Author's Response: yep it gonna be one hell of a showdown. thanks for reviewing. |
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