Reviews for Hell on Earth 3: Trinity
| axel |
12/31/05 - 01:47AM |
16: Chapter 15: Remorse Pt 1 |
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Oh boy. This ain't good(the kidnaping, not the story) Keep it up.
Author's Response: Wolfram and Hart have stopped messing around now. this time they are play for keeps. Thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/28/05 - 03:33AM |
15: Chapter 14: Psychosomatic |
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Shes not really dead...right?
Author's Response: Yes she is dead. The question is now can the others handle the trinity without her. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/27/05 - 09:32PM |
15: Chapter 14: Psychosomatic |
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So The savior of mankind dies, (Why does that sound so familar?) But at least VampireBitch Willow got what she deserved. Keep it up.
Author's Response: gotta take the good with the bad (the bad being the trinity now having no one to oppose them anymore). yep that is the last time the Vampire-Witch is gonna cause problems. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/26/05 - 11:31PM |
14: Chapter 13: The Vampire-Witch |
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Ok admitte it. You killed Kennedy off, because I questioned you about her. That is so childish. (I'm kidding). Anyway Great chapet. I'm begining to wonder if this end of the wolrd will really be, THE END OF THE WORLD. In truth That's probably the only way to shock anybody anymore. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Nooo i killed Kennedy off Because Vamp Willow wanted to piss her goddess self off Remember she was taught by Angelus and as i said before she is about maximum emotional damage. there is still another twist to reveal so stay tuned. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
12/26/05 - 10:08PM |
14: Chapter 13: The Vampire-Witch |
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oh shit...how the hell are they gonna save Rebecca now? Please please please update soon!
Author's Response: It's tough when your being attacked from the inside. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
12/23/05 - 01:34AM |
13: Chapter 12: Absence |
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oh god,thats not good. They are all really screwed.
Author's Response: the Vampie-Witch is back baby watch out! thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/23/05 - 01:18AM |
12: Chapter 11: The juniors |
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Aww fuck. How is she gonna get out of this one? I know theres no way she'll kill Alex.
Author's Response: it's hard to fake with the bad guys looking over your shoulder. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/22/05 - 09:50PM |
13: Chapter 12: Absence |
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DAMN IT, I knew this was going to happen. Yeah just go to work for wolfram, and Hart. You can trick them. Now the world's going to DIE! And ofcoarse Vampire Willow has the Divine ones powers. Rebecca, you dumd blond! (Ok I know she's not blond, but still) Anyway good work. Keep it up.
Author's Response: You know the old saying 'Never ignore the warning of a monk'. now it is time for the Vampire-Witch to play. Thanks for reviewing |
| Peaches Girl |
12/21/05 - 10:30PM |
12: Chapter 11: The juniors |
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OMG!!! Not her sweety. Thats terrible for Rebecca having to deal with Alex. What will she do? Cant wait to see. Great chapter.
Author's Response: It is a problem. either blow her cover or kill her fiance it's not an easy choice. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/21/05 - 08:56PM |
12: Chapter 11: The juniors |
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HEY rebecca. There on to you. They are F*#king with you. Your plan isn't working. If you don't stop now, they use you to help THEM win. ARE YOU LISTING! Good work.
Author's Response: so you finally worked out what Wolfram and Hart's strategy is. the question now is what is more important to her. the prophecy or her fiance. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/21/05 - 03:32AM |
11: Chapter 10: Faith, Hope and Glory Pt 2 |
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So Glory got what she deseverved. That was fun. And hopfuly Roy will to. So Shona quit hu. Why do I think that will come back to get them. Good Work.
Author's Response: Shona quitting is going to have an effect on four innocents who have been over looked throughout the tragedy so far along with a few more surprises along the way. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/20/05 - 11:16PM |
11: Chapter 10: Faith, Hope and Glory Pt 2 |
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Poor Nighthawk. I'm glad that sick bastard got what he deserved though. What happened to Glory was funny. Too bad a lot of monks had to die to get rid of her.
Author's Response: They knew what needed to be done and were willing to do what it takes to get rid of the hell god. Roy just went that one step too far and nighthawk had to retaliate or else it would have gotten much worse. i wanted to make this chapter full of action since this is the 50th chapter of the hell on earth trilogy. Thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/19/05 - 11:54PM |
10: Chapter 9: Faith, Hope and Glory Pt 1 |
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Those monks better be ready. They are definatly in for the fight of their lives! Update soon.
Author's Response: Not even the power of the divine one is going to save them so they have to be ready for anything. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/19/05 - 10:00AM |
10: Chapter 9: Faith, Hope and Glory Pt 1 |
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Sorry for the double review. But I just reallise something. What ever Happend to Kennedy? She was in the first chapet of the second story, then she disappeard, into thin air, s. You said Spike, and Illirya where dead. Did she die to, and I just didn't catch that? Just wondering. Anyway, Good work.
Author's Response: oh crap i knew i forgot somebody. that's the problem with improvising a story occasionally characters slip through the cracks. it's like how Illyria vanished in the hell dimension back in futures divided. the quickest reason can give is that she was working overseas. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/19/05 - 09:39AM |
10: Chapter 9: Faith, Hope and Glory Pt 1 |
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Yeah this ain't going well is it? I guess Glory gets to go home. Keep it up.
Author's Response: no it's not. those monks better be ready. thanks for reviewing |
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