Reviews for Oh Snap.
| MissEdith |
12/20/05 - 04:25PM |
6: THE WASTELANDS--Dawnish |
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Hmm, interesting. The Peej is evil, eh? I think I'll have to go back and re-read this whole story sometime when I have free time (as in not now or anytime soon, unfortunately) and make sense of everything....
Author's Response: Ahah, aha. I have a problem where I can't let things come immediately clear; people tend to have to read most of it over. Thanks so much for your time and comments. :) |
| littlewiccan |
12/11/05 - 12:50PM |
4: Five minutes before sunset. |
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Yeah, at first I was wondering what was going on but now it seems to all be falling i nto place, intrestin. You dreamt all this?
Author's Response: Well, the actions from the dream are all there. The dialogue I wrote because it was a silent dream, aside from the occasional line. I'm glad it's starting to make sense; my style is generally obscure in that sense and a lot of people just don't get it for a while. :) Thanks for reviewing! |
| MissEdith |
12/10/05 - 04:33PM |
4: Five minutes before sunset. |
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Aha, some comprehensible plot emerges! Is Blaise the "her" they were talking about earlier?
Author's Response: Yes, she is. I was hoping that connection would be made. Thanks for reviewing.:) |
| MissEdith |
12/10/05 - 04:30PM |
3: Afternoon |
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I really like Blaise and the great dialogue. The transportation line, and the standing around like a dolt....
Author's Response: The dialogue is mostly made up. It was a silent dream, aside from things like the transportation line and "that's why I'm right" from Shady in chapter two. There are some others that I actually dreamed, but the dream itself was very serious; there was no banter about homicidal thoughts, for instance. So thank you, I'm glad it was effective. :) |
| Timan |
12/09/05 - 07:12PM |
4: Five minutes before sunset. |
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Blaise is a slayer, neat. update soon i need to know more
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. |
| Timan |
12/09/05 - 06:15AM |
3: Afternoon |
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I was going to go home, but my transportation is having a problem wherein it can’t transport anymore, thereby rendering its name and function completely useless. great line. i think most people take stating the obvious for granted but i think it can be a powerful tool. once again i congratulate your brain for fine work. If there's any other body part that you feel need recognition for it's work let me know (i specialise in knees). great keep it up i really want to know what happens next
Author's Response: Aha, that's one of the lines I actually dreamed. Most of the dialogue is fabricated, but people were always talking; I just couldn't hear them. I distinctly remember that line, though, so happy days. Thanks for the review. :) |
| MissEdith |
12/08/05 - 02:39PM |
2: Come morning. |
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I really like this story so far. I wish my dreams were this interesting. And that I could remember more of them....Anyway, I really like that it's in first person, and that it doesn't bother trying to explain things to the reader. This makes it all seem mysterious, and rather dream-like to me.
Author's Response: Aha, you find it intriguing. I get mixed reactions with this style of writing: People either like it or they hate it. I'm glad you approve. :) Thanks for reviewing. |
| Timan |
12/08/05 - 05:24AM |
2: Come morning. |
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oh my god! they're not going to see her are they? please tell me that it's not her! great chapter you have me hooked. oh and by the way thanks for the Q. i traded it for an R two S' and a V. this might not sound like a fair trade but i really like making motorcycle sounds . . . RRRRRSSSSSSSSSVVVVVV!!! RRRRRSSSSSSSSSVVVVVV!!!
Author's Response: Ahahahahahaha. Well, at least you have a motorcycle, even if you don't have a car. Besides, I got that Q back today and gave it to a friend along with an E, so it's all square now. Thanks for commenting. :) |
| Timan |
12/07/05 - 10:56PM |
1: The Hook |
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Very intriguing. i congratulate you brain for such fine work. update soon
Author's Response: I was congratulating my brain all day today. I had the dream stuck in my head and I was going, "Oh man. I'm so pleased that my sleeping mind came up with this. Oh snap." Well, now it has more than one person congratulating it. ...Which is only a little weird. ;) Thanks for reviewing! |
| Wonkabar |
12/07/05 - 09:17PM |
1: The Hook |
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hmmm...This has caught my attention. Love to see where you're going with this.
Author's Response: Whahaha! That was my intention! I'm so pleased. Haha, thanks for commenting. |
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