Reviews for Expecting
| Sinister |
12/25/05 - 01:05PM |
18: Goodbyes |
Signed |
This isn't the end is it? This can't be the end! It's so sad and unfinished. Well just to let you know I did start a story called 'The Second Generation' and it was inspired by this great story. Keep up the good writing. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, it's the end...of Part 1. Expecting 2 is already up. |
| axel |
12/24/05 - 03:01PM |
18: Goodbyes |
Signed |
| That's it? She leave's when her mom need's her the most? What a selfish bitch! |
| Sinister |
12/24/05 - 09:55AM |
17: Showdown |
Signed |
| Awww....I agree with axel I was always a Kenney fan. She wasn't really one of my favorites but I liked her. It was a good way to for her to go though. I feel so bad for Willow though this is her second wife she's losing. And the girls its like their second mother their losing...very sad. Very nice work though and I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| axel |
12/23/05 - 11:25PM |
17: Showdown |
Signed |
| OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED KENNEDY! YOU BASTARDS! (sorry, I couldn't help it.) I'm one of the few people that actulay like Kennedy, so I'm sorry to see her go. (HEY who threw that? That's not funny!) Anyway still a great story. Keep it up. |
| Sinister |
12/22/05 - 09:19PM |
16: Revolution |
Signed |
| Oh no! I hate it when this happens. I have to know whats going to happen next! Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Sinister |
12/22/05 - 10:07AM |
15: Why Do We Fight |
Signed |
| Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what the kids end up doing. Sounds like Alex is a born leader. Keep up the good work! |
| Fighter78 |
12/20/05 - 10:00PM |
14: Escape |
Signed |
| Keep up the good work |
| Sinister |
12/20/05 - 09:19PM |
14: Escape |
Signed |
| Nice update! I can't wait to see how their going to get the other kids out of there. Your doing a great job! |
| Psyche2 |
12/20/05 - 08:05PM |
13: Battle Royale |
Signed |
| Awesome! I really love this. I do not believe they are dead but this is an interesting twist to the story. |
| Sinister |
12/19/05 - 07:56PM |
13: Battle Royale |
Signed |
Very interesting. We know they can't be dead but I'm very interested in seeing what did happen. Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I got some ideas about the next chapter. |
| axel |
12/19/05 - 07:50PM |
13: Battle Royale |
Signed |
I think we know there not really dead though Good work. By the way, the next Area episode is going to be up tommorow. I'd be worried if I were you. (evil grin)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.....(Wonka is curled up in bed, hiding under her covers with a tennis racket.) |
| Sinister |
12/19/05 - 01:09AM |
12: Back From The Brink |
Signed |
Oh yea and I almost forgot. Great job tricking us with the whole Xander thing. I def thought he was picking up a razer to cut his wrists or something. Never saw this coming. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, that was something I came up this called a 'plot twist', I think it may catch on.....:-) |
| Sinister |
12/19/05 - 01:07AM |
12: Back From The Brink |
Signed |
| Nice chapter! Very action packed...I love it. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Sinister |
12/17/05 - 10:02PM |
11: A Turning Point |
Signed |
| No Xander! Don't do it! Their going to get them back they always do and Alex is going to need his dad. Damn your good at leaving things suspensful please please update soon. I need to see whats going to happen! |
| Sinister |
12/17/05 - 09:58AM |
10: Lost Treasures |
Signed |
| Great update. I love how this story started out as a really funny story and is now developing into a really interesting adventure story. Great job! |
[Previous] 1 2 3 [Next]
|
|
|
|
Rave
Barbie Girl (Becca)
biscuit07
Filmtheory (Jim)
Malice (Jess)
MebbtheScribe (MichaelB)
Reset (Allie)
Shay (Marrisa)
somnambulist29 (Shea)
Stephanie Loss
Wendyness (Wendy)
Questions?Contact Us
|
|
All stories on this site have been archived with the authors' consent. Do not copy these stories for your own uses without the express consent of the author themselves. Buffy the Vampire Slayer TM and Angel TM are © UPN, WB, Fox and its related entities. All photos on the site are © UPN, Fox, Warner Bros, and/or their respective owners. No profits are being made by use of these images.
Powered with the assitance of eFiction.
|
|
|
