Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| Skyler Fox |
06/08/06 - 08:05PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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You covinced Axel to write? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT HE'S PUT ME THROUGH? AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No. I actually have no idea what he's put you through. |
| axel |
06/07/06 - 10:34PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Ok uh, it looks the same. I unless you added chapters in the middle, or something. Please explain. Anyway if this is the end, as you've said you wanted to end it on two(Though I hope you don't end on a cliffhanger like that) . I'll miss it, since this was the first story I ever read here, and it's what motivated me to try writing (So everyone knows who to blame) 2.
Author's Response: Wow- I’m so glad to hear my writing motivated you. (notice me focusing on the positive). This pretty much is the same. I split five very long chapters in half to up the chapter total to 22. Thus, the very unceremonious end of season 2. Sorry. Although I don’t know when I’ll start it (probably about the same time as Campus Life season 2), there will be a third season of Running on Faith. I have enough plot ideas for at least a third season and *possibly* a fourth. Thanks again for reading. |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
03/03/06 - 11:13PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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I really like this fic - really hope there will be an update soon. Most action fics put me to sleep cuz I can never figure out what's going on and have an inclination to skip anything with the word "fight" or "sword" in it, but I really enjoyed this.
Anna's cute little "floating" thing is adorable. Kinda thought her name was Anya @ first...can't wait to see Buffy, Angel and Spike reaction to the baby and the impending wedding.
SS4EVA
PS. Hate to say this but - do you have ANY idea at all how many spelling and typo mistakes you've made in the last chapter alone? I came across this one time where I THINK lorne was shuddering but you wrote shuttering - and I have no idea if you meant what you wrote or whether it was a typo. Will see if I can find where it was and get back to you.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. It’s always great to hear from another reader. I’m glad you like the action and the floating stuffed animals. Hopefully Anna will remain adorable and not be eaten by anything. As for reactions to the wedding, yep, that should be interesting. As for getting a beta, I’ve had a few already and they never last for one reason or another. One reason is that people often e-mail me, anxious for another chapter. I often feel a little pressure to get stories up quickly, so I don’t really like waiting a week to get my stuff back from a beta. Also, I tend to write in spurts that leave betas struggling to catch up. Now, of course, I have your complaint about typos. I would be very frustrated by it all if I took it this seriously. As it stands, however, this is essentially a leisure activity for me, so I do my best not to get annoyed. For the most part, a group of writers with whom I’m familiar read my work and I read theirs. When we notice typos, etc., we e-mail each other off list to let each other know. You can feel free to do that, or to post reviews mentioning the typos. But if you want everything clean before it goes up, you might want to skip my stories. That would make me a little sad, because I do want all the world to read and love my work. However, I don’t imagine I’ll be able to find another beta anytime soon. Thanks again for the review and for the suggestion. Let me know if you find the Lorne shudders line. |
| twinblade |
12/01/05 - 09:10AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Dr. Kevin TAM... I've read all of this and Just Today Got That. Grrrr Argh. Well done , by the way.
Author's Response: Actually,I can't remember anyone mentioning that to me- getting the Dr. Tam reference. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you've been reading. |
| spideygirl |
11/30/05 - 03:54AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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I couldn't stop laughing where first Dawn was so pissed off with Connor, then after she informed Connor about his baby, she asked Faith to babysit Anna for 2 hrs because she wants to have sex with Connor. LOL!! I couldn't stop laughing!!
I love these 2 parts the most:
*Connor stood and set Anna in her crib. She began to cry, but Connor caressed her head and whispered to her. “I just need to do some things for us, Anna. It’ll only be a minute.”
*Connor dropped down onto both of his knees. He reached into his pocket and pulled out the case. Dawn’s heart jumped form the pit of her stomach to the top of her throat and she could only squeak. Connor opened the box. Dawn began weeping from the sentiment alone. The beauty of the ring didn’t help.*
So Sweet !!
Author's Response: Poor Dawn is emotional these days. As for the proposal, I wanted it to be a sweet moment. On an unrelated issue, I'm watching "Melrose Place" and a cult leader is telling a really boring story. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when I get it up and posted. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/29/05 - 10:38PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter. I love the part were Angel says 'what is it with you and evil guys' very cool line. Anyway, cant wait to see where is goes from here.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. But seriously, what IS it with Buffy and evil guys?! |
| always angel |
11/29/05 - 01:59AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter. I like that Connor and Dawn are getting married and I really like that Buffy killed the Immortal. But what happened to Angel?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. If you're psyched about Connor and Dawn, be sure to read the next chaptewr when I post it. As for Angel . . . well, read the nexty chapter for him as well. |
| axel |
11/29/05 - 01:57AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter!It could have been the season finnaly (though I hope it's not) And I'm glad Connor, and Dawn got together. Glad Kennedy got better (though I think even a slayer couldn't get better that ffast, from brain damage!) Anyway good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Nope,m not the finally. I was planning to save htis for episode 22 (which will be the finally), but ran out of things to put betwen here and there. Now I have to move up my season three material and, well, probably end htis thing after ttwo seasons. And yeah, kiennedy healed quickly, but I was going to use her in the fight. Then I didn't. |
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