Reviews for Forsaken 2: Origin of the Species
| redmoon |
12/13/05 - 05:14PM |
6: Occupational Hazards |
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| Very evocative emotional context at the beginning: touching that they can sense that sort of thing in each other. "It would have been cooler if they'd sent Jem'Hadar" YES! Awsome!! That's going to keep me laughing for a couple of days. I hope Layla doesn't die!! I don't think Jimmy would recover. Keep up the fantastic work! |
| redmoon |
12/08/05 - 07:41PM |
3: The Value of Sound Advice... and Tea |
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| Another brilliant and funny chapter: "...you're making LESS sense than when I first met you..." Layla is hilarious and Jimmy's concern is really touching. Poor Kessler: so much stress. Looking forward to more! |
| redmoon |
12/06/05 - 11:16AM |
2: The Art of Family |
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| Excellent chapter; looking forward to reading more! |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 09:11PM |
2: The Art of Family |
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Again fantastic chapter! I'm glad Layla and Jimmy are still together, they're so cute.
Author's Response: Yes, if anything every happened to them, I believe I would be linched |
| redmoon |
11/28/05 - 07:04PM |
1: Creatures of the Night |
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YES!! SEQUEL!! Excellent!! Brilliant and hilarious as always: "In a whole nother wing," "girly girl girl... like a sissy girl" har har har. Loving it. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Holy Crap you just made me giggle like a sissy girl on qualudes! If it wasn't for your reviews I never would have finished the first one and gotten it published! Thanks! |
| always angel |
11/27/05 - 02:40AM |
1: Creatures of the Night |
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I'm glad you decided to do a sequel. Did the first one get published yet? Anyways great start and update soon, i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: The first one is being published. I am still waiting for the proofs though. It is coming out under the title (which I don't like very much) "Vampire Slayer: One Foot in Darkness" I like the latter half of the title, I just don't really care to have VAMPIRE SLAYER right there, ya know? Anyway, thanks for the compliment, I will work had to get the next chapter up soon! |
| Angels Shadow |
11/26/05 - 11:01AM |
1: Creatures of the Night |
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WOW - this is amazing! Your descriptions are unbelievably well done, and the action sequence was exhilirating. I'm really enjoying Emma's character so far and the banter between her and her brother was amusing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! |
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